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illuminati
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Registration Date: 21-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'DisMaL FaTE (preview)' and post your comments here!!!
just got an external mixing console and was working on this...it`s not quite done so i faded the end...i`m kinda stuck...need another transistion...
any suggestions?
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05-11-2004 23:20 |
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Polar Freq 
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i like the radio thing'
roni size just put it as a start of his album
thiz iz better
make the iron backsnares louder
that'll be cool
background noise iz dope
why'd you miss the hats?
drumnbass neeedz hats man
and speed it up allitle
over all
from 100 till 0 i give: 40
(if 100 was diesel boy and zero waz me)
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-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
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i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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06-11-2004 19:20 |
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charleskoncept
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tune in and turn it up.... 
the tracks melodic feel is very present and very well executed, the kick sounds a bit flat but that may just be the speakers im using,
the bass line is very nice... overall a good taste of
good things to come.
the vocals are not something i like but you seemed to place them in quitre well. maybe put them a bit more towards the backround. IMO
4/5 <- so far,
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06-11-2004 20:36 |
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illuminati
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yeah i noticed myself once i had a chance to crank this up a little that the snares and other sounds weren`t loud enuf...it`s still coming along i need to add something of another transistion and it will be done...i`ll make sure and upload a better mixdown
thanks for leaving comments tho
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07-11-2004 04:10 |
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Surya
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Intro is dark 
Ah, nice bassline!
Switching is nice, but try giving your drums a bit more power for some serious headbaning! (tip: ghostsnares 
) Still sounds too much as a part of the intro. If it is, you're giving away too much too early in the track...
Ah, breakdown, so it was part of the intro.
Nice, but don't play two notes of your bassline at the same time! So, you still need to add more power to those drums man!
Not too fond of the ethnic sounds towards the end, they don't fit that well imo.
Could be realle phat, work on those drums some more!!!
2.5/5
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09-11-2004 21:49 |
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