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marisol
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'falling leaves' and post your comments here!!!
Its been awhile since I've had any inspiration but today I managed to get the attention of my muse so here is a clip of what we came up with today. more to come;)
edit by thechonic:
This track has been removed, Marisol has uploaded a new version here
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05-11-2004 20:31 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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Glad your feelin better man....
i like the the intro very mellow. The whole track is very relaxing. yet it doesnt feel finished yet... more to come?
your snares are really snappy and your atmospheres are excellent good job, brother...
3/5
__ charleskoncept
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05-11-2004 21:20 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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good, it gives you the nintendo feelin (the start i mean)
maybe shoten it a bit.
make the kick more noticable by either volume up or dist or smthn
good, anyway
__ -Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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06-11-2004 19:57 |
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jfry
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Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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Kinda reminds me of an 80s track? I think its a good base for a more involved track...maybe throw in some latin flavor...might go well with your existing bongos. I like the chill factor though.
Cheers
JFRY
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08-11-2004 00:35 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro pad sounds a bit too synthetic.
Percussion is nice though.
Ah, sweet synth coming in. Nice. Dreamy. Goes on for a bit too long though.
Try making your intro half as long...
Quite good how you bring in the drums.
Ah, sweet bassline. Well done.
Add some stuff to the drums now, or it will get boring...
Could be a really nice track!
2.5/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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09-11-2004 19:57 |
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PaperWall
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Registration Date: 15-10-2004
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its not the most heavy d&b but i like it cuz thats what it makes difficult alot of musical movement what i like
unboost ur bass cuz its to much low freq
i c u still have to build up the track
i would say DO IT
its nice easy listening electronic d&b
Greetz Paperwall
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12-11-2004 16:48 |
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