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biogy 
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Registration Date: 06-02-2004
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Please check out my new track 'mechanical bomb' and post your comments here!!!
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05-11-2004 14:57 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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quite a dancefloor bomb. dont like the way the intro goes over in the beats. intro is kick ass!!!! 
but then i've got a bit of a 
feeling. because you'd expect a kind of a "messiah"-sound. but it isnt. beats need more breaks. they are well produced tough. maybe some noises need some eq-ing???!!!
Man that intro !!!!!! bring it back in the song more often and let the intro and the rest of your song connect. the vox at the break are cool.
pitty of the intro!!!!!really, you should make it the base of the song
3/5
cheers
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05-11-2004 18:22 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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i definitely get a "messiah" feel outta this.
the string teasers in the intro are definitely very tasteful and they carry into the main rythem of the song which is a nice touch.
I cant say that i dont like the warbling synth line that much, it seems to detract from the rest of the track, IMO
the first break was very well executed, although i think the bass could be a little deeper...
4/5
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05-11-2004 21:23 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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yeah the start iz goood
maybe allitle the same, to long
qk any way
the wobbler maybe its not my taste or smthn like that
but i don't feel it
itz a bit to used by everyone
the lines are goood
good violins addin
good one, but as someone said and i forgot who and im to lazy to check out, you need more messin around
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06-11-2004 19:26 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice intro. A bit sad about the distortion on the vocal though. Can you remove it or is the sample distorted?
The fade in for the drums isn't very creative. Look for a more intresting way to make the transition. Drums are quite fine though.
Bass needs a boost. Sub too.
Vocal is cool and funny 
Track gets a bit too repetetive after a while though.
Not a bad concept, but execution needs some work still...
2.25/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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