drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Memoria(titan2)vip Memoria(titan2)vip Author Post CHALLENJA Steppa Registration Date: 25-07-2004 Posts: 81 This is a track that sheads the blood from my memories onto a digital format. This is what happens when a tortured heart bleeds in conjunction with the soul of a man bent on expressing his will unto the world. http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=357510&T=8723 For all you upincoming producers out around the world here's my Myspace music page. I want to add those who want more than a meanial life through the use of artistic expression http://www.myspace.com/users6328659 LOOK OUT FOR "DEAD BY DAWN" being posted on the day of the dead Nov 2nd as always truly yours The Almighty Soul Challenja __ may the lord bless and keep you! 30-10-2004 06:47 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Drums are punchy, but maybe make them a bit more smashing. Bass is a lot of rhumbeling sound going on, try clearing it out a bit. Halfway the track you bring in a new leadsound. Try doing it a bit earlyer. Try evening out the volumes of the different sounds too. Switching between the diferent elements should be worked on a lot more too. Not really bad, just needs a lot of work. 1.75/5 __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 02-11-2004 15:20 CHALLENJA Steppa Registration Date: 25-07-2004 Posts: 81 thanks for the review james __ may the lord bless and keep you! 03-11-2004 01:02 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Memoria(titan2)vip