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biogy 
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Registration Date: 06-02-2004
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Please check out my new track 'battleship' and post your comments here!!!
style "tech dnb"
prog "reason 2.5"
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28-10-2004 20:11 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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waw killer intro. like it all. wow crazy melody. 
too cool. nice how it comes up with the trance sound. dont like the high slow melody maybe reverb on it!!! snare should become more expressfull. some variation from this point. very psychedelical sounding! sub louder too. much much!! and a good ending.
nice
3,5/5 for now needs some slight changes
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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28-10-2004 21:29 |
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haxon
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Registration Date: 21-10-2004
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i like the feel of this one it has a good tech step effect.. stick with that melody and build a stronger drumline and go with it 
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28-10-2004 23:58 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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good song. I think you should turn up the bass. the beat is good. the samples in the intro sound nice. Wasnt really diggin the melody. i bit to strange for my taste.
nice one
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29-10-2004 16:53 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nicely dark.
The Matrix samples are... well, I don't like vocals that obviously come from one movie or another. I like them to be undefined.
Drop: huh? Not what I expected!
Drums are quite nice, sub works and melodies are playfull. Fun 
The soundquality is nice, but you do need more low mid, bass and sub. Those are underrepresented (hum, if you know what I mean).
Not bad, but still needs work. Structure is quite ok though.
2.25/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-11-2004 17:23 |
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biogy
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to create track i spend 1 day ,for this time i can create something good?
or i need more then 1 day ? i heard that good producer spend week, or more to create good shit ,it is true ? sry for my eng ]
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01-11-2004 20:58 |
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Surya
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Depends... Sometimes I only need a few hours, mostly I work on a track for a few weeks or even a few months (with gaps offcourse)
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-11-2004 21:31 |
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biogy
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ok thx !
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02-11-2004 14:50 |
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saphir
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Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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dope tune man!
here's why
very moody intro, luv the reverbs kicks
seq, dry, but effective
vox fit the vibe,
(maybe try to add a "reverse" like sample, right before it drops, this will give the drop a bit more power, though i don't really use that much aswell)
melodie:
nice one, maybe make the sub a tad more upfront.
or layer it with an effect on. duno whatever sounds best. i just think it needs a bit more fatness.
extra synth & stabs fits nicely, it all comes together.
nothing against the teebee like stabs near the end, maybe use them in a variation in the first section of the tune. they kinda pop up without a warning, oh well
personal thought. 
oh! almost forgot, dj friendly & very dancable,
can't keep my head still
i wished i had this "insight" for tunes, really like the feel of this track.
maybe the ride cymbals sounds a bit to harsh duno.
i'd rate this 5/5 if the minorities are gone and you send me the 320 to play out!
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www.nitras.be
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by saphir: 03-11-2004 17:12.
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03-11-2004 17:09 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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The feel is right. Vewyyyy wight. Nice sounds and fx.
The eq'in concerning all the mid-treble sounds are dope. Very clean spacious placement of your sounds.
But the drums could use mooorre power, the subbas as well, janx these faders skywards and turn this into a smooth techy roller!
We want more punch! Now!!
breakjunk signing out.
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"I'm not under the alkafluence of inkahol that some thinkle peep I am.
It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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05-11-2004 22:29 |
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