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thechronic 
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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First of all, if you have some spare time, could you write a couple of reviews? 
Nice MP3 encoding, sounds open and detailed 
Good example of how to use widening effects, you made the pizzicato / harpsichord wide, but all essential stuff is solidly in the center. Other producers take note!! It's been a recurring problem lately.
Cool track overall, bass could use some tweaking, it is really damped too much.
For the rest only minor stuff, snare could improve a bit, pizzicato a bit too loud, kick a bit too soft, too much reverb in general.
Like the stereo delay on the child vocal. Buildup is good. Nice Banco de Gaia style samples. Good chord structure!
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26-10-2004 03:07 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Wow, that harp sound sounds GOOD! Nicely done bro!
The bassline misses a bit of power and, a bigger problem: it's out of key 
Fix that, coz this track would be so much better!
Drums are quite allright but layering a pitched down clap with some reverb over the snare (Ill.Skillz style) would be nice!
The melody that comes @ 4.08 is out of key too
Vertt nice soundquality! Even the lowfi vocal sounds open.
4.5/5 for the soundquality
3.5/5 for the levels
3/5 for the track (would be probably 4/5 or so when the problems get fixed!)
Can I do a remix? Please 
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26-10-2004 11:40 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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intro s good but a bit too long. great sounds . damm good produced!!!
. kick is too light! must be heavier. some nice filtering. vocals great!!! i stay s a bit too long in the same melody too maybe a little variation or raise the melody a note to the end. just some toughts . except for that good track.
3,5/5
cheers
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26-10-2004 14:20 |
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Procleus
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Registration Date: 10-12-2004
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Very nice track. Dark opening, horror-like, nice staccato-string melody. Good offstep beat. Well mixed and definitely going in my mixing!!!
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10-12-2004 03:41 |
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Surya
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10-12-2004 13:28 |
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Hidden identity
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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Big question:
What would make it drum-n-porn if the people having sex sounds were taken out of the song??
...&...It is progressive so i don like that kind of thing as much as if it had more variety and melody focus.
Sorry to sound negative but i thought the make out vocals sounded lame. Sounded to me like some1 wuz gunnu puke soon 
Were did you get the wind and string instruments from?
I was realy wanting some arabic snake-charmer sounding flutes for a middle eastern themed amen / hard core fire fight.
will post for helps with samples at prod page.
will not review song cauz its not my thing...
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