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dj eskay 
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Please check out my new track 'Eskay-deep sources (clip)' and post your comments here!!!
I got my hands on reason last month and worked very hard at a first tune .Its almost finished and i cut a clip out of it to make it a listen here .
Its my first first track and I think ist something DIFFERENT of other tracks here so dont be mad if you really dislike it .
Grtz
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21-10-2004 19:46 |
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marisol
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right away you gotta set that high tone deeper into the mix with a very minor almost inaudible amount of delay and volume reduction. good movement but the sounds are a bit thin. Use some carefull drive on the bass and mids with some light filtering bettween the two to give them some seperation. the snare sound could benifit huge with a light amont of drive aswell. this is very good for a first track but the sounds dont have much depth in them as is. try experimenting with a low pass lfo on mids and bass aswell, often this frees up room for other sounds to breath....just remember to start with a very minor lfo cut and be modest with the amount, but it never hurts to try out extreme levels.
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22-10-2004 04:09 |
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Soi
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Aha, dj eskay in the reason-mix! Seems that in 1 month time , starting from scratch, i presume, you achieved quite some progress.
Some tips:
bass too loud, and you might change the waveform of it, try a sine or a detuned saw, for example
beats: quite ok.
keep working: you'll get there. Remember it all comes from the mind, not the keyboard.
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22-10-2004 13:15 |
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dj eskay
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Tahnk you fro comments but I'm no producer so i dont know al those terms .I just play whats best for me .
I think i will let the producer work to the real porducer under you guys
grtz siebe
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22-10-2004 19:29 |
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dj eskay
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Nobody else ?
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23-10-2004 17:55 |
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Surya
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Me 
Drums need a boost and they sound a bit... simple? Dunno, they miss something, they're not really convincing. Add some ghostsnares, layer some snares over the one you have now and make some more variations too the drums.
The sounds (leads and basslines) sound very digital... which I don't like.
You say it's your first track? Well, I've heard much worse first tracks, but that doesn't make thisone good. But it's not completely awfull either. You just need more practice.
1.25/5
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24-10-2004 19:32 |
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dj eskay
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You could be right but I'm totally not agreeing with this
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28-10-2004 20:09 |
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krynolige
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srr surya,i think you your comments are a litlle bit rough for eskay's firts track,it's ok to say what's good and what's bad,but don't grade the track!
good job eskay!
greetz
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15-11-2004 22:34 |
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Surya
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Well, it's hard not to sound to hard and be honest at the same time if you think something is bad... Sorry Siebe, you know I mean it well...
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