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stino
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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Please check out my new track 'OCTO -*BER' and post your comments here!!!
erm
beatbattle compo entry
far from finished but: lack of time...
school is slurping it all away but I tried.
__ www.myspace.com/stinomg
www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
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20-10-2004 13:00 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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yeah heavy!!!
maybe a bit less of the room effect on the snare. nice voc manipulations. heavy kick
very nice bass. maybe the voc's bit louder. hats should be a bit dryer I think too much reverb. snare more expressive. bass and terror sounds are very good
nice work afterwords but I feel like I mist a part. production on basses and noises is great maybe the beats need something???
3/5
cheers
__ muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
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Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
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20-10-2004 15:33 |
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Dj-commen
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Registration Date: 19-10-2004
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yo, the intro was good along with the bass, but your production levels were off, and the synths didnt sound that good either. keep tryin dude, oh and check out my site
peace
__ DJ-commen
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20-10-2004 15:40 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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very dark so far. Bass sounds evil. some amens would compliment this one nicely.
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20-10-2004 16:30 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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THe whole thig sounds like its on mute on a car stereo. like im missing something.
the intro sounds pretty good. the tension builders in the begining are really good nice buildup. it drops so good!!
i think it needs a bit of work. The break is a bit too funky for my own taste, but then it goes right back to the dark shit.. so kudos to you....
3/5
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20-10-2004 19:28 |
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stino
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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Originally posted by Dj-commen
yo, the intro was good along with the bass, but your production levels were off, and the synths didnt sound that good either. keep tryin dude, oh and check out my site
peace
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synths ? what synths?
it all comes from the samplepack !
)
__ www.myspace.com/stinomg
www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
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20-10-2004 20:31 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Too bad you entered too late too
Hoover in the intro is hardly noticable
Sometimes your kick is twice as loud: try not doing this, it sounds very unnatural.
Bassline is nice
The sound is good, and the melody works too!
Drop: works just fine too. The bassline becomes more heavy and the drums are nice too. Maybe give them a slight boost though.
The drums do sound like they miss a certain part of the frequency scope in the mid department though, check it and re-EQ a bit.
3.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the mixing, levels and EQ.
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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21-10-2004 11:54 |
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stino
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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yeah too bad
but school is killing my producing really
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23-10-2004 12:08 |
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