hedset
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Please check out my new track 'dark ode' and post your comments here!!!
this is a dark and beastly track, its full of chopped up amens and other beats, ive been working on this track for a couple of weeks, hope you enloy and thanks in advance in feedback
Edit by Surya: New version in this thread
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15-10-2004 11:14 |
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muphasta 
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yeah me big fan of this style!!!!
killer basssssssss 
primary beats should have more bass and less high. wicked sick break
needs a bit eq. bit of click here and there. nice chops and breaks but theres too less of a bass kick sounds wich is a bit steady you have many different loops but they all got other bass kick EQ. the one with the most steady bass kick should return more often. ( click at the break was a bass kick ok). Its not easy to fine eq different loops. maybe just ad a sub baskick or real old skool detune jungle bass!!!
anyway I like this stuff but needs finishing def.!
2,85/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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15-10-2004 14:10 |
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charleskoncept
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old school.. man this shit is ill i love old school shit no one does this anymore keep it up man this is good.
the distortion on the breaks a little much but you did it right. your amen breaks are right on... 
you sound a little muted though maybe bring everything up a little...
your ppooing a little towards the end but i think its really good work..
4.5/5
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15-10-2004 20:21 |
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marisol
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gave this a listen earlier and everything builds up nicely to just before the drop then the mix goes static for a few moment before the drop i thnk if you continued to build into the drop the track would bemuch more intence the b line works but could use some good health stabs of bass in the relief sections.
good work and keep workin onit
3/5rating
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15-10-2004 22:58 |
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Surora23
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i lie this a lot...good stuff man keep it up
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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16-10-2004 23:29 |
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Surya
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Introbreak is a bit light, but I guess that was your intentions.
Bassline kicking in: nice, reaises expectations for a huge drop
Amenteasers could be more intresting imo (and more of them too)
Takes a bit too long before it drops though.
Cool vocal
Drop: should be louder. And amens should have more hi-end they sound a bit low-fi now.
Switching is quite good, but not all amens are equally loud or have the same soundquality. Try evening that out, your track will really benefit from that!
The background noise is a bit too much at moments. It really makes your track very noisy. There is also a very irritatick click on it (on the left channel) which you should filter out. And having such a huge sub on a backgroundnoise is not advisable.
Has potential but needs more work.
2.5/5 -> this could raise a lot if you straighten some problems out a bit more!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-10-2004 10:59 |
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Airfull
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hmm...not really my style!!
I need more amen init!
and a bit to disturbed
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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19-10-2004 18:16 |
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hedset
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thnk you muphasta, charles, marisol, surora, surya, airfull, and yes, this song is disturbed,lol. i tried to make the samples sound the same quiality, but its kid of difficult, i listened to the track a couple of times and i fixed it up, i did almost all of what you guys suggested, thnks for the advise and inputs
big ups to you all
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20-10-2004 03:27 |
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Surya
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New version in this thread
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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