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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'carbon milk' and post your comments here!!!
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13-10-2004 21:43 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Allright, i downloaded your track.
First of all, it sounds quite decent, i really like all the background effects. Drums are tight, nice chopping of those loops. The breaks are okay, could be better. I think you should do a little less hats and stuff during the break. Also, the breaks may take a little longer. Just to get the track more interesting.
Some variation is good too. After a while the song is getting a bit boring, you just heard it all a little too much. Dont really like the bass, but that's personal i guess. The intro is missing too, you just throw all in at the same time. I think you should start with something slow, like the pads or something, and later on add the beat, but not all of a sudden, just let it take the time, if you know what i mean.
well, overall an okay track with some good parts and some parts that need to be done better. I've only just begun with producing music, so im not an expert (yet 
) but well this is just how i think of the track.
I like the sort of lounge-part in your track, so i think i'll just rate this 3/5 or something
Keep making this stuff, i like it and i 'd definitely like to hear your next songs.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by marine289: 14-10-2004 11:24.
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14-10-2004 11:21 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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starts a bit immediately. maybe a small fill or snare to announce. basses are great and heavy. dont like the high sounds tough. Jungle loops should be rougher. nice bubling sound . maybe heavier your snare drum and refresh the hats a bit. they sound a bit dull. nice filtering to the final break. beat sget better from there , maybe just louden them a bit. you have some nice sounds in it. but it needs some more feel, something really you. (cant explain it properly). you should work it out some more. you have a lot of sounds where you can variate with. use a slower build.
2,75/5
cheers
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14-10-2004 12:03 |
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DISKYZE
Member
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
Posts: 54
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im really feelin this tune..could use a lil bit clarity in the mastering but i will fix that wid da mixer...definetly droping this shit this week..thanks for the tune dog...look forward to hearing more..D
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16-10-2004 04:30 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice but seems a bit short. Make it a bit longer.
Drop: ah, didn't expect to hear that kind of bassline and hoover. Nicely done though.
Once the hoover melody gets more notes it's not that good anymore imo. The melody is a bit too obvious.
Drums: Good layering and enough variations, but the kick needs a boost.
Structure is good with enough variations. Stuffed with effects and stuff: nice.
Soundquality is nice, levels are good but not great. Overall the track has a very digital quality to it. I prefer a more natural sound, but I guess that's personal.
2.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-10-2004 12:53 |
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