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muphasta 
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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first I must say that the idea is really cool and hard. maybe a bit too complexe .
good sub and basssound at the break. in my opinion a bit too hats and rides. snare 's sometimes bit over the top too. cool filtering. the beats still need Eq adjustements. the rolling smare needs to be lowered. you need to build up your beats more! there are pieces in the back that should be in front of the song. you begin pumping but go down from then. at the end theres too much filtering too.
Eq the snare's and dont let it get out all at once!!!!
2,5/5
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11-10-2004 18:08 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Originally posted by muphasta
there are pieces in the back that should be in front of the song. you begin pumping but go down from then. |
So you mean i should all built it up, and not give away all the track has got?? (you know, save some for the last part of the track?)
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11-10-2004 20:19 |
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saphir
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yeh i agree, maybe it all comes down abit if you keep the intro lesser drums.
hmm maybe try to shift down your bass color.
most oscilators have this function.
duno if thats the right word for it
not such a person that knows the terms by heart.
that's just a personal guesture, cuz i like deeper sounding bass notes. 
i like the idea but for example the hihats sounds a bit dry, and the drums ghost hits may get a lower volume.
all imo 
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11-10-2004 20:27 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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rush hour is right... this one rocks it... and at break neck speed too. the buildups are really good imo.. im still a novice at this but it sounded really good
there is some stuff in the backround i would like to hear come up... your bassline is so roni size... 
i like it
4/5
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11-10-2004 23:02 |
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marine289
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Originally posted by charleskoncept
rush hour is right... this one rocks it... and at break neck speed too. the buildups are really good imo.. im still a novice at this but it sounded really good
there is some stuff in the backround i would like to hear come up... your bassline is so roni size...
i like it
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Thanks a lot, you gave me some confidence
And if my bassline sounded like Roni Size, that is true, i really like his style, so for me that is a compliment.
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12-10-2004 11:38 |
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E-life
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I really like the new sound that comes around the 4:05 or something. to bad you filtered it a bit out 
this song gets a 3.5/5 from me (I really like it, but I missed the guitars you @$&^@)
next song gimme some guitars back 
elife out
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12-10-2004 11:52 |
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E-life
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toprated this week? 
nice job marine (although I liked mvb more 
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14-10-2004 09:42 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro isn't that intresting.
Like the complex drums though
A lot of hi-end... a bit too much for my taste...
Lol, you used the "Snapshot" bassline"
Melodies are too relaxed in comparison to the drums...
Also, your melodies are out of key with eachother.
Bass isn't deep and warm enough and needs a boost.
Sorry, didn't like it. The melodies aren't good, the sounds aren't that intresting, the EQing isn't good either and the structure... the track falls flat on its ass half of the time. But the drums are really cool 
2/5
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17-10-2004 12:28 |
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