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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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You busy bee,
Editing of the drums is indeed very nice. maybe stereo-ize the etnics, put basses more upfront. use more velocity-notes for the durm-part. it will become a bit less hectic and a bit cleaner. very cool etnic sounds tough.
you need to expand the whole song to even higher and harder levels because it feels a bit short now. more climax more astonishing wow's and waw's.
2,80/5
cheers
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11-10-2004 12:32 |
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saphir
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Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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i like the intro drum sequence
but i wouldn't build the whole tune upon them.
but it's nice to hear you tried something different
the intro hihats wants me to get wild, then the intro drums come and give it a whole different vibe
not a bad thing, but different...
overal feel: experimental with an electro touch
a sub would be nice
nice effort
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11-10-2004 16:54 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice drums indeed.
A bit too much kicks for my taste though.
Main pad isn't that intresting, neither is the melody you play with it...
Intresting experiment, but nothing more.
2/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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15-10-2004 12:03 |
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PaperWall
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Registration Date: 15-10-2004
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i playd alot with the rithem but i think u need a little mor variation on the rest to i maen the sounds and the song may be longer but maybe ur not finnisht yet
and in the beginning its to boring but good variation in beginning on the rithem
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18-10-2004 19:31 |
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Airfull

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Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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ur mind is loaded with shit!
i c this visual
a man waking up, having this freaky nightmare
he starts to walk aroud, very fast (like dubble tempo)
seeying al kind of visuals himself!
from faces, to things in his youth, people who did things wrong to him, all memories he actually wants to get rid off...
he goes to the kitchen taking all those sleeppills, he actually may not take...because of that it's getting al turbid (troebel) in his mind (that's the water effect in the end)
then he falls down with convulsions....
pretty sad ending!
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19-10-2004 16:45 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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A bit like how I felt this morning when I got home
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19-10-2004 17:09 |
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