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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Fallen Balcony (Surya Compo)' and post your comments here!!!
This is a song i did for Surya's lil competition... it doesnt have all the samples used in the work, but its made with only the ones provided (as in rules) all drums and samples were cut and edited by myself... although this is just an experiment and something i did in a few hours and is for the lil compo, im actually very pleased on how it came out.... comments encouraged...i may do more stuff like this in the future...
Please give me your thoughts!
BIG UPS! :rinse:
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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10-10-2004 10:18 |
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charleskoncept
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this is really good.. i like the rolling bassline.... very cool. 
the breaks are very tight.. a definate plus.. all in all its a good track... better than anything i could come up with for the comp...
peace and lil comp grease...
3.5/5
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11-10-2004 21:28 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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hey thanks for the props...im really glad you like...anymore takers? please poste some more ocmments, im hoping for soem good feedback...
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12-10-2004 23:38 |
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thechronic
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This is really cool stuff. Love the off beat kick drum patterns in the beginning.
Really a lot of inspiration went in this one, something I often notice with compo tracks, because you have to work with a limited set of 'tools' people get very creative in programming.
You have a few double triggers on the snare again, and I think you have too much bass in your sound system because the bass is hardly audible (check it on headphones to see what I mean 
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Nice chord scheme!! Haunting and dark pads, lovely! great drums (cymbal washes!!!), vocal is well placed.
Not many mistakes in the mixing apart from the bass. Mastering is good too, it's very much alive.
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17-10-2004 20:59 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i like the drums, excelent ghost (if it is)
like it alot (even though the voice i don't like . sample wise...)
nice slowdown....i like the rave level an sample
open hats nice and appropriate..
vocals not top notch (could play wit em' a bit)
after the build up, change the bass.
but good drum aftervuildup thing...
and change the vocal or leave it completly..
at a place you got to same soundz overlapping... maybe on prupuse i dono..
those raves act as bass don't they.. you could put some bass in it and move the raves (filter them) up the ferquency spectrum..
good.. i say 2.5/5 drums excelent play...could put more samples...
oh yeah.. nice kick in the downtime..
peace
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07-12-2004 02:19 |
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DJ OMNI
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Registration Date: 06-12-2004
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I have to dowload this thing.
you teamed up with surya or somthin' why does it say surya combo 
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07-12-2004 05:05 |
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janverstichel
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that's a good beat
nice rolling ghost snares
(vocal)
the string (or pad i dunno)i don't like
bassline is heavy
DM
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07-12-2004 16:36 |
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Glim
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Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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nice lively intro
like the rides
dark build-up
not too keen on the synth ur using but i like the melody its nice and offsetting lovely notes for dnb
biatch sample becomes tireing imo
as you made this from a limited sample pack i give you full credit
3/5
G
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07-12-2004 17:53 |
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spudleyq
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nice.......good shit.......nice mash up style......break that beat!!! bass sounds nice......those drums are the winner though......they take the cake
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07-12-2004 21:44 |
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Surya
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Booming bass is great
Drums: not very straightforward and danceable, but nice. The could use some more punch though.
Not much to add to the other comments. Nice, but not great.
2.5/5
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