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marine289 marine289 is a male
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Please check out my new track 'MvB' and post your comments here!!!

I tried to make some drum n bass combined with a nice guitar. This track took me about 2 weeks to make, but i havent worked on it every day.
I made it with FL Studio 4.5.2. and i used slayer 2 and the Korg Legacy Collection vsti.
oh and btw: the subs were made by MixManDan, using Osc 3x and some other stuff. Im not experienced enough to make that yet. So, I'd like to thank dan again :)
Well that's about it. Oh wait, i forgot to mention that this is my first upload on the internet (ever), my second DnB track, and my third song.
Hope you like it.

PS: sorry if i sended this twice... i made a tiny mistake while uploading it.
08-10-2004 13:48
marine289 marine289 is a male
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Oh BTW: ignore the irritating sound starting at 4:12...
you hear it a few times in the song, but it's a warning for slayer2. (the guitar) It's warning me that i only have a demo...

Im really sorry for that, but well i just cant afford slayer2 yet.. Cry
08-10-2004 15:33
muphasta muphasta is a male
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Damm i hate slayer I en II so much. you've put it over all the rest. The hip hop beat variating with the dnb is good. tranzey sounds commin up too. nice filtering!!! drop take s too long!!! a bit too much schwinf and schwoeng too. The beats are way to far under!!! you craete a surtain atmosphere with this but need to level the sounds.
when you filter watch the high freqs see that they dont go in the red!!
And never buy slayer. ( unless you really want to off course)
I havent got a clear idea about this one I think you've put a lot off attention at your atmo's but less attention to your beats and Eq-ing. just my opinion!!!
2,75/5
(couldnt give you 3 because of the F***ing Slayer sound)
cheers

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08-10-2004 15:53
stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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I found the intro to be a bit cheesy. The swiching from hip hop to dnb was well done though. once the dreamy pads come in i think the song improves but you should turn up the drums a bit, especially the kick.

nice one Bigup
08-10-2004 17:09
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suprise, I registerd Shocked

I like the guitar, but thats because I am more into metal and rock and shit ^_^. really relaxing track, already listening it for a few weeks. like the bird at the beginning. can't wait to hear this at a dnb party.

really cant wait to hear the final version of your next song, that 1 is gonna rock as well (to bad no guitar in it Cry )

I give this song a 4 out of 5 (keep it rocking)
08-10-2004 17:15
Mix_Man_Dan Mix_Man_Dan is a male
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ima give it a 2.9/5 Big Grin
just didnt sound the way that my tastes are,
but that 1 guy gave it a 4/5 so congradulations!

sorry Arjen but i only give it a 3 cause i heard it too
much and got a bit tierd of it and damn....
well i try to be fair here.

Big Grin 3 is actualy a good rating you know,
like 2.5 is average.

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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
09-10-2004 00:46
marine289 marine289 is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Mix_Man_Dan
sorry Arjen but i only give it a 3 cause i heard it too
much and got a bit tierd of it and damn....
well i try to be fair here.


well, that's ok, everyone should be fair.. and to be honest, i didnt expect to get some high ratings at all, so im happy with it Smile

actually i ve heard it too much too.. i hope i can listen to it again in a few months without getting bored

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09-10-2004 09:45
Sensa Sensa is a male
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First Review on Dnb.be......GOOD TO BE BACK!

First thing i will say to get the story straight......not my kind of tune at all. BUT i can apreciate this style, this is a very well put together piece, very atmospheric and ambient. Very well produced.

Big ups

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12-10-2004 18:59 Homepage of Sensa
marine289 marine289 is a male
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Thanks a lot everybody!
I really appreciate all your help and suggestions. This is a great community Bigup Smile )

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12-10-2004 19:32
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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osrry i didnt liek this one at all...for reason i jsut wasnt feeling the hip-hop and the guitar things wasnt getting me either, and it just wasnt fitting with the tranzey stuff...imo though...so dont take it the wrong way....just know that it didnt crank my tractor lol... Roll Eyes Frown sorr 2/5

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Rinse it OUT!!!! Rinse

13-10-2004 00:03
Surya Surya is a male
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The guitar sounds quite decent, but not PHAT enough.

The drums sound really thin, give them more low mid and mid.

Trance sounds are nice. Although the parts where you use them sound like something is coming, and it doesn't...

One big issue: where's the bass????

Some big issues with thisone, but not bad per se.

2/5

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13-10-2004 10:59 Homepage of Surya
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