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Mix_Man_Dan 
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Registration Date: 02-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Samuri Attack' and post your comments here!!!
ok here it is,
B-Complex only gave "The AllMighty One"
a 1.25/5 for a DnB song, and a 2.5/5 for an
experimental song.
this one is a mixture of genres, i always mix
genres, thats just how i am.
but its more conguent and more DnB then
"The AllMighty One".
post your replies here!
i especial value the repleis from average people
who dont make music. if you would be willing to
pay money for a CD with this kind of stuff on it
please tell me! thanks :D
This track has been deleted. Reason: cleaning up old tracks
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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06-10-2004 20:37 |
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charleskoncept
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this one is more structured than the almighty one.... i like it a liittle less for that actually..
the hoovers<?> i guess they are are very nice. the amen that comes in at 1:52 or so is a really nice touch kinda break beating it up so to speak. 
the one thing i can say i REALLY didnt like is the ending... IMO it just went out way to sharply...
all in all a great track...
3/5
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06-10-2004 22:11 |
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MOpKOBb
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i like the beginning, don't like the clap sound in it do... then your first break is good i think, then you come in with the amens, but those may need some more power, because it seems the song needs a speed boost from then on! normally if the drums are heavy and the tempo is a bit slower, the effect is that the song could sound more mighty, but that effect isn't here enough, maybe if you work with the bass a little more it could get fatter. i just tell you what i think don't know if more people feel like this you know...
your idea is good in my opinion.
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07-10-2004 14:48 |
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marine289
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I like this one, it's a good one, dan.
I also like this one much more then the clown stuff..
I like the drums after 1:52, but i dont know about the intro. there's something in it that i dont like, but i cant figure out what 
I really do like the slow pads before the first break.
also, really cool filter at around 2:30
but as someone said before, i really dont like the outro.. i guess its just too sudden
The track keeps me interested untill about 2:52
good track, but how can i rate this?? (sorry, still a noob 
) )
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07-10-2004 15:48 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
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ok all,
i fixed the ending, but thats all i feel like fixing,
i know there are things that i can do to make this
song better but i will only be able to do this when
the ideas come to me...
i will some day though.
tanks for du reviewz!
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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09-10-2004 00:57 |
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B-complex
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Okay here is my review
It begins with a lo-fi sound, i don't really like 909 snare drum here, in 0:37 there are quite nice drums altough quite slow for dnb, I don't like much those gated synths. Quite interesting is "chord" sample it has better structure then song before but i think that it is very badly mixed and sounds are very low quality.
my rating : 1.7/5
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09-10-2004 01:31 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
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EEEEE!
low scorez again 
hmm,...
bad sound quality and mixing ey?
what should i fix then?
(im gunnu upload a new and un-mastered song so
you all can tell me what to do and add soon,
its done but not done done, i will upload real soon)
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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09-10-2004 03:01 |
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B-complex
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Well i think that there is too much instruments in the mid frequencies and they are not harmonically tuned
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09-10-2004 12:35 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
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sigh...
poor me....
poor me and my poor quality beats...
ah, what to do...
ey, i made a hard hitting heavy rave assed beat just
now but i need to fix more before i upload.
i am guessing it may get better marks then
my other 3.
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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10-10-2004 01:00 |
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Surora23
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Its not really your beats, its really jsut the atmosphere of your track... do this... speed your track up to about 175-180bpm's add a really hard bassline on the break....(some sub aswell) and drop a few of those gated chords, extend the track a bit, and extend the outro....IMO if you do that this track would be bomb... a good dancefloor hit...but its not quite dnb yet...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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10-10-2004 10:23 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
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hmmm,
well im gunnu go try what you said right now,
in the mean time Surora23,
why dont you check out this
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http://www.drumnbass.be/forum/thread.php?threadid=2775&sid=
^its liek teh hard step RaVeZeRz.
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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10-10-2004 19:11 |
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Surya
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Intro is quite allright, like the samurai in there.
The track is VERY slow thoug!!!
Ah, you used one Dave's breaks
But due to the pitching down it sounds low-fi instead of crisp and stuff.
And although your hats aren't crisp, they are too loud (a bit).
Lots of different breaks in here, which is nice, but cut them up man, to make them less straight froward.
The choirsound is quite allright.
You need more bass though, it's not loud enough.
Much better than your otherones, but too slow and ditch the 909 snares!
1.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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13-10-2004 10:22 |
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saphir
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don't take this offensive man but
you seem to be very focused on what people like
i've seen you write many times, what do you like, or i got these points or something like that.
points here, points there
look man, the day i get a 10+ on a tune, i won't be more happy then i got a 0
if I and I alone dig the track it means more then 10 points. simply put: when i work on tunes, i start thinking about a vibe, a hook, a drum line, and a breakdown, then i search samples that COULD fit this idea, then i start to build. i even subtract more sounds then i add. maybe you could try this.
duno. i am not saying you don't work in a bad way, it's just something i've come across myself, peeps told me the same thing.
i'd start with thinking of a idea for a tune, a story
then work out the tune
sorry man
i don't like this.
it's good to experiment but you got like 10different songsstyles in 1 tune. thats what makes it so difficult
i agree with the comments above, it's too slow, and the vintage sounds doens't really fit. that's imo.
anyway don't hang your head
"it's all in the name of progress", a very wise man said that once...
again no offence, cuz peeps seems to be very picky on comments like this!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by saphir: 13-10-2004 12:31.
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