Surya 
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Please check out my new track 'W18 (remaster)' and post your comments here!!!
A track I made 2 years ago (aprox) and I descided to remaster it, since the bass was too loud and the hoover was too quiet.
So I didn't change anything to the sounds or structure.
This is also the first time I do some post-rendering mastering. I tried making the mix really loud but still clean.
I know the track has some problems
- The intro is lame
- The intro drums are bad
- The intro is empty
- The outtro... which outtro?
But I'm quite satisfied with it acually. I made thisone mainly to work on my amen editing skills, but I think the main idear of the track is quite allright... Should I rework it more?
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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04-10-2004 14:10 |
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muphasta
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Glad to hear my sound system wasnt broken after 15 secs. if it gave me that impression the intro must be kick ass. like you said yourself a bit empty but not less creepy!!! the first beat is indeed to empty. after the break killer basses 
. but I feel that there is still something to come when it ends.
The structure in the beginning untill 75% of the song is ok. But after that you seem to have no idea where to go.
Like i said before this story is unfinished. It doesnt raise enough to the end.
3,5/5
cheers
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04-10-2004 17:04 |
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charleskoncept
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wow.... very nice buildup, and i can really hear the layering in the snare....
bass is a little grainy. atmosphere is really nice....
those snare hits are monstrous very upfront...!!
Reminds me of leon switch and kryptic minds-take the pain away... very cool....
i dont know too much but it almost feels like its wanting to go somewhere but ends up just kinda....ending?
nice outro
i dont know very much about compostion or timing but this is very good
4/5
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04-10-2004 20:34 |
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stickbubbly
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hard ass shit!!! I would like to play this at a party. nice work with the amens. All i would saay is to build on the intro and maybe lose the static effect.
deadly!!
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04-10-2004 22:46 |
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Surya
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Well, thisone was in my demomix I posted on this site a few years back, and it works quite well when mixed acually! (I was amazed myself...)
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04-10-2004 23:34 |
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Surya
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Bump!
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07-10-2004 22:27 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Akura
The Amens are good but I don't like the combination of the kick and the sub bass. When I hear the kick without sub it's good, together with the sub I find it too weak. Is this a sideeffect of the effort to get a louder mix? |
Nope, it's like that in the original too.
And you're always welcome to come over and help me out with them changes 
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07-10-2004 23:18 |
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Akura
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Allright it's a deal
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08-10-2004 12:21 |
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MOpKOBb
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ok the electricity thing is euhm freaky! don't lett me hear this when i'm stoned man! i would jump under a chair! but i don't really like the quiet moments in the beginning...think a short silent moment isn't bad, because after the break it seems more heavy then! but i think this is a bit to long, as if the song has to start over from then. your amens sound serieusly good i think.
your build up with your drums are not bad i think, but i think it would be good if you put another sound or something in there until a higher point is reached and then leave it out again. but...i don't know 
i not that experienced
Would rework the beginning to yep.
like it in general! those amens... mènga!!
yoep!
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08-10-2004 13:24 |
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SARIN
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What u said is right...a bit more work in the intro wouldn't hurt...but the quality is cristal clear, the way I like it.
That weird white noise is bizarre...it's pretty eerie actually.
Fat amens, good sub, might need a bit more variations.
Hard synth is sweet as, this could turn into real choonage.
Keep um commin hard!!
SAR!N
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08-10-2004 14:16 |
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saphir
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oink, but ok, here goes the new post.
damn man! this one is fat
utterly basic but to me very effective.
can't comment much i like it the way it is
will work no doubt!
is it me or do i hear some clicks in the mp3?
maybe it's a click from overcompression?
the electric sounds are well done
sound is ace.
can i try a remix? np if not
i hear some twists
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11-10-2004 17:30 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by saphir
is it me or do i hear some clicks in the mp3?
maybe it's a click from overcompression? |
Well, the static clicks a bit, so I may be due to that. I didn't use compression so it can't be overcompressed
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Originally posted by saphir
can i try a remix? np if not
i hear some twists
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Sure, PM me for MSN details (I got a new account)
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