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charleskoncept 
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'lords of the worlds' and post your comments here!!!
this is little different than session 1 (for those who have bothered to listen) big ups to those who did!!
Its a little more in your face so to speak so let me know what you think. there is a lot of bass involved there is a break or two involved and its kinda choppy but thats what i like.
but no worries it is jungle/dnb or maybe hardstep i dont like to classify these things.
i love constructive criticism....
peace
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02-10-2004 17:24 |
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marisol
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how did you make that reese line?
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02-10-2004 19:05 |
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charleskoncept
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om gonna be upfront with you a reese line? i dont know what that is but please i want to know... 
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02-10-2004 19:14 |
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stickbubbly
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dont know what a reese line is either.
This is an evil track. I think some amen's would go nicely with it. Your drums are good, but try to make sure all your kits are the same volume, the drums in the intro are too quiet. The bass is deadly. I think the song switches around a bit too much but thats my own taste, i still enjoyed it.
nice work 
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02-10-2004 21:41 |
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Surya
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A reece is that typical DnB bassline: a lot of distortion but not the kind of Dillinja bassline.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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02-10-2004 23:04 |
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Surya
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OK: review:
That one reeceline is from the samplepack on this site I think, but I'm not sure.
Nice atmospheric background sounds.
Drums seem quite nice, but they need a boost, they're overpowered but the basslines.
The track itself isn't that intresting. You have a few basslines, and you just switch a bit from the one to the other a bit, but not in a very intresting way. Try building tention here and there, and then release that tention, it will make your track far more intresting.
You can clearly hear from this track you haven't been producing that long. But that's normal, just keep it up, you'll make pogress fast, trust me
1.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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