Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Nice intro. Good atmosphere in this sound and melody you did here.
Like the pattern you made with this amen, fits well with the melody.
Like the bassline a lot too, but I'm not sure it fits with your melodies...
Second melody kicking in with a hi string. The string sounds too try, give it some reverb, maybe a chorus or something...
Good amen edits!
Sax loop with the breakdown doesn't fit the track at all man, thatone fits better for some Distorted Minds ripoff or something.
Second part of the track is essentially the same as the first one, which is nice, but it would be nice if there was some extra stuff there...
Soundquality: most stuff sounds fine, but your amen needs work. It almost completely drops off above 10khz and you do need those frequencies above that to make them sound clear. Maybe layer some hats or rides over it?
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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) tnx!
