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mkunoff 
Newbie
Registration Date: 27-09-2004
Posts: 4
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27-09-2004 18:27 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
Posts: 311
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Hey,
First of all, I want to tell you that Im also a newbie when it comes to making DnB. I dont have that much producing experience, but Im only a fellow music producer. oh btw; i produce with FL Studio 4.5.2. 
Well, about the track. Good beats, i really like the part when the drums just sort of drop, around 1 minute. If I were you, I'd raise the volume of the drums, and lower the rest just a tiny bit. But that's just the way I feel it. The drums at 2:56 are pretty good too.
Well you used a lot of vocals, which is not a bad thing, but in the first part of the track are way less vocals than there are in the second part of your track. I feel that the second part has a bit too many vocals, but again, thats just the way i feel it.
What I really did enjoy was the scratching, I dont know if it was really scratching (4:56), but whatever it was it sounded really cool. Could you please tell me what it was?
And may be you should focus a bit more on melodys and basses than on the vocal samples. Although some of them were pretty cool.
3/5
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07-10-2004 18:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Intro is good, vocal is really agressive 
Tramen teasers are nice. But the vocal before the drop are too loud.
Tramen itself sounds a bit low-fi, work on that.
Bassline could use some more bass
Hi synthline is nice!
Did you use the DelayLama synth? Nice
A bit too much different vocals thrown all over for my taste...
Mixing: 2/5
Track: 2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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13-10-2004 10:54 |
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