drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Two New tracks in a True Playaz Stylee! Two New tracks in a True Playaz Stylee! Author Post SoundByte Tourist Registration Date: 26-09-2004 Posts: 13 Just uploaded two ne tracks... Ego Drive - Mongy orchestral with snppy beats. Bump This - Full on lively jump up with rolling beats. You can check them both Here! __ SoundByte - Drum and Bass Soundz 26-09-2004 14:28 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Ego Drive: Intro is quite short, but OK. Bassline drops: deep and nice, liking it! Drums are simple but effective. 1.40: some crunchpad comes in, but it sounds out of key with the bassline although it follows the same melody... fix this! Soundeffects are nice. 2.30: track starts becoming too repetetive: add more variation that makes a difference. Second drop: new bassline is cool too. Could shake to this. But again the track becomes a bit repetetive despite the variations in the drums. You did your best to add enough variation, but you need more than some variations to the drums and some effects here and there to keep a track intresting for almost 7 minutes. I think you should add some kind of string or something to fill it up a bit and to make the variations make a difference. Soundquality and mix are good though Good efford, but you're not there yet. 2.75/5 __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 28-09-2004 11:56 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Bump this: Intro loop is a bit silly. Drums and bassline kick in. Drums are quite good, but bassline is dull, just like that loop. New bassline coming in: it's a bit better, but not really convincing. Melody is a bit clownstep-ish. Nice work on the drums after the drop though. Organ-style bassline kicking in: don't like it, but that's due to personal taste. Less repetetive than Ego Drive, but with less intresting grooves and the sounds of your basslines aren't that good here. It all sounds a bit silly. And still, after 6 minutes it starts getting a bit repetetive again. A track like this should in no way be over 8 minutes, like thisone is. Make it shorter, like 5 or 6 minutes. Mixdown is quite good again 2/5 for the track 3.5/5 for the mixing __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 28-09-2004 12:13 SoundByte Tourist Registration Date: 26-09-2004 Posts: 13 Cheers man! __ SoundByte - Drum and Bass Soundz 29-09-2004 17:33 infazz Tourist Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 21 hmm... there is some in this track !!! but soryy I'dont like bass sound !! And sorry for my english )) __ 29-09-2004 19:50 SoundByte Tourist Registration Date: 26-09-2004 Posts: 13 quote: Originally posted by infazz hmm... there is some in this track !!! but soryy I'dont like bass sound !! And sorry for my english )) Which track and some what? __ SoundByte - Drum and Bass Soundz 30-09-2004 18:02 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Two New tracks in a True Playaz Stylee!