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itex
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Please leave some constructive critism on this one Smile
https://soundcloud.com/mimkvibes/walking-beside-you-wip4
11-03-2014 12:30
JacksonP JacksonP is a male
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Registration Date: 09-12-2010
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Hey,

sounding really good. Nice sounds and melodies.

Having the chords change every 4 beats made it sounds a bit repetitive, even though there was a lot of variety in the melody. Try having the chords change in other locations than every 4 beats for the whole song.

nice work Drummer

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27-03-2014 04:32
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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The hi-end instruments should be louder and the midbass should be more in the back of the mix because it is not the instrument that "makes" the track.
An intro that is somewhat different from the main tune and that creates a desire to hear a drop (building tension) would be a good idea too.

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