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marisol
Steppa
Registration Date: 23-09-2004
Posts: 279
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Please check out my new track 'sunshine dust' and post your comments here!!!
smooth and grimey
This track has been deleted. Reason: Old tracks removed
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25-09-2004 19:04 |
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insurgent 
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Registration Date: 24-09-2004
Posts: 14
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good work... impecable timing, but grooving. Really dug the break before the synth comes in, and then the space in the outro. right on.
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25-09-2004 20:02 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 02-09-2004
Posts: 191
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the little voice that sais "unhappey" sounds not good enough and slightly out of time, some parts get realy good, and you used alot of detail here, but there was a problem with consistency i think....
i love what you did with the riffs of all those difforent instrument snippets all at once, that was GREAT but there wasnt as much of that as i would have liked to hear. all in all i liked it 
i give you a 3.4/5 because later on in life you can check back to you'r progect file and change a few things to quickley turn it into a 4.5!
keep it up.
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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27-09-2004 04:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Buildup to the drop is nice. The "unhappy" vocal is a bit too fast. Timestretch it a bit, could be cool 
Drop: lacks power: the bass is really nice, but it overpowers everything else. Boost the drums, make them agressive and pumping.
The structure needs work though. The intro is nice, and then it drops, which should be ok after you fixed the noted problems. But then everything falls flat again as soon as you ditch the bassline. It will make people on the dancefloor wondering what is happening and they'll be waiting for the track to gain power again.
Second drop: same as the first one, with the same flaws.
Towards the end the track looses a lot of power again.
Try bringing more tention in your structure. And sort out the levels a bit, and the track could be a lot better
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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27-09-2004 10:44 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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WWL.
intro's exciting build up nice. should become warmer earlier in my opinion. the break s pretty nice. bass sounds could be more powerfull, isnt that great Eq'ed.
its all bass here. drums should be more present. be a bit more creative with that one bass sound. guitar sound is nice. beats should become more complex earlier.
reversed sound good too. the idea isnt bad but you need to put more attention to it. the levels are quite a dissaster. more variation too!!!
2,10/5
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28-09-2004 19:57 |
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infazz
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
Posts: 21
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hm....
not bad !! bud it looks like you used loops up ther !! 
and you shoud make bass sound a litle bit down!! fuck hmmm... you know, volume down 
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Nice atmosfere in track! 
Sorry for my english!
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29-09-2004 20:01 |
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