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muphasta 
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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well the intro defenitey tranzzzy,
but when the beat drops (wich is quite nice) the tranzy aspect fades 
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it remains atmospherical. wich is very good.
at 1.45 you should add maybe a fill in or a rverbed snare or somethng cse the beats just pup out of nowhere. could be ok like it is!!?? from this point you should excite the basskick. trance comes back in!! but with some level or freq work left. There isnt much of a climax too. and variate some on your drum programing. Theres just not enough contrast. I think you should terminate the nice idea you've come up with. hear it true several sound systems, adjust Eq, ad or manipulate sounds and boost up the basskick. my opinion
2,75/5
cheers
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25-09-2004 12:04 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Drums are very soft, so are your sounds and melodies.
The hoovers are out of key with the rest, you should fix this.
The melodie coming in indeed sounds euphoric, but the strings don't sound euphoric, so this kinda doesn't work together too well. And I think it sounds out of key too, not sure.
Soundquality is quite good.
I have to say I don't like the track man. I don't really like the sounds you chose, I don't like the melodies you played. Sorry for that, but I'll try to give you a fair score.
Keeping in mind the melodies are out of key and that your structure needs some work (buildups don't build up tention and stuff) I'll have to give this a 2.
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26-09-2004 17:29 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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trancy what to say about trancey dnb... the snaps or waht ever they are really dont go with the rest of the track i cant really comment to much i am just a beginner but i must say i dont like this track.
im really not much for trancy waves or anyhting of the sort
but the drums are nice and i think they save it from being a complete loss.
2/5
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charleskoncept
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02-10-2004 18:06 |
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shonan
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Registration Date: 26-11-2004
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I'm gonna stand up for the trance aspect of this tune, it adds a nice flavour to the track...
The drums could be have more bite though and the build up around 3.00 starts to drown everything out, then the melody drops down to a quiet level - too much of an extreme switch imo...
Enjoyed the bassline, even though it got lost in the middle of the track so 2.75/5 for this one
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Tweakin' over in Taiwan...
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26-11-2004 04:22 |
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MiKi 