biogy 
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Registration Date: 06-02-2004
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Please check out my new track 'nemesis' and post your comments here!!!
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This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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21-09-2004 16:22 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Wow! Very nice sci-fi intro. 
All the atmospheres and basses are reeeaallly nice, but your beats lack a bit in power, imo. Not the sound, but the idea, the rhythm, it has this 'swing'-feel to it, and i think that perhaps it's better off with a techstep, neurofunk or tramen-influenced-whatever beat.
And it could help if you change some hi-hats velocities, this way it's too straight.
But the atmosphere/pads are great.
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21-09-2004 20:13 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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nice track! Your ambient sections sound good. The beat is well made but it could have a bit more going on. The sample of the girls voice worked really well.
nice work
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22-09-2004 00:17 |
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marisol
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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nice intro......maybe use the movie vocals a bit more sparingly overuse will almost everytime turn something good to something cheesy. nice bass build.
could use a few other things going on around 2:00 into it. echo stabs and such. you should find relief patterns for your pendulm bass ride. it just wears thin pretty quik. altogethere a decent track. drums are solid almost all the way through. the bass never hit me in the chest to hard and could use a tune up. atmospherics in this track were a bit overused it felt like it was the same 16 bar loop every time i noticed them, nice and clean however. altogether a very good track, good work.
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23-09-2004 21:54 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice intro indeed. The rave melody is much better in this version.
Soi is right about the drums. They are nice, but more agressive drums might fit better with the track.
3/5
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26-09-2004 16:54 |
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Mix_Man_Dan
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 02-09-2004
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i gave it a 4 because of how good it sounded, its not completely DnB, its somthing else, so im not gunnu say make the drums more agressive, im gunnu say great work and give you a 4/5 !
sounds good enough for a movie, the sound it self was real good.
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Wow, i was feeling pritty bad there 10/18/2004, but when a person is under an emotional extream error is sure to soon fallow.
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26-09-2004 21:48 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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i love breathy vocals and spoken words. more trancey/darkstep then i would like. bassline feels like it wants to punch but never really does. Thats a nice teaser. 
the breakdown lacks a little something but what that is i leave to you.
didnt really like the whole loaded gun thing but who am i to criticize.
overall the feel was good.
wouldnt mind spinning this myself
kuddos to you
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30-09-2004 23:00 |
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MOpKOBb
Producer
Registration Date: 22-04-2003
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yaw! i like it mèn! like your drums to... they surprised me the first time they came in but never sounded wrong. also like how they fade away. song sounds powerful and scary in total 
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