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samurai samurai is a male
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Registration Date: 21-11-2002
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Please check out my new track 'Weebl' and post your comments here!!!

made this for some competition. keepin my account here alive!

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17-09-2004 23:47 Homepage of samurai
muphasta muphasta is a male
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hey,

nice bass intro yet bass 2 comes very rough true my amp. maybe some freq. adjust? nicehats and snare, but maybe bit louder. bassdrum s bit weird. my idea:use one heavy steady kick then lower the volume on your kick line put them together...
basses are good but it needs more feel.
after the break it improves Bigup
2,95/5

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18-09-2004 12:20
Dave_Akuma Dave_Akuma is a male
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the drums sound a bit too 'drum machine'-like--ok, there, that's better when the other drums come in...as a whole, the tune sounds a bit empty, could benefit from some light atmospheric pads or something here and there in the background...those stabs you brought in were a nice touch, i was kinda hoping you'd keep that in longer...the mixdown could be re-done, as that one bass stab is much louder than the other...a bit more work can turn this into a solid tune... Bigup

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19-09-2004 18:23
stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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Not enough going on in the intro, and I didnt feel any build up to the drop. The bass line is good and the drums sound much better once the song has kicked in with some more cymbals. With some more work it could be a deadly track.

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20-09-2004 20:55
Totalrecall
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funny track ]
21-09-2004 15:58
Surya Surya is a male
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I would never make a track with such an intro, but ok, I'll go with it this time Big Grin

The second bassline is too loud man, it overpowers the rest.

Kicks are too loud and too bassy. Give them more mid and turn them down.

Snare is nice but make it a bit punchyer.

The techy pianosample is nice, but give it some delay and maby some reverb too.

You defo need to pay more attention to your levels man. Some stuff is simply way too loud.

Track seems a bit slow too, what bpm is this?

There's no real structure in the track either, you just alternate some different basslines the whole time. You need more to make a track really intresting. And add a decent intro man Wink

1.5/5

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26-09-2004 12:11 Homepage of Surya
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