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reckless
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Registration Date: 01-03-2012
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New tune I'm working on.

It has a bit of a strange feel. comments and feedback are very welcome.

RKLZ - HILIFE
21-03-2013 11:29
JacksonP JacksonP is a male
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Nice track, I like the overall sound. Try adding some variation to the bass line so its not just following the chord progression. The piano melody is good too, brings some good emotion to the song.

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22-03-2013 03:48
Subkinetik Subkinetik is a male
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Nice chilled out track. I would make the build up a little more intense somehow, maybe a silent part, some sweeps, maybe some filter automation/modulation, maybe a crash... The kick which u roll to build up to the drop sounds a little ineffective in my opinion. The tracks seems to have a good structure and isn't boring at all, although as already mentioned, some chord variation would never hurt it. It's well mastered too, i can see that from the waveform without even playing it. Nice job. Just my taste i guess

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Vehemence Vehemence is a male
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real nice melodies in this but it lacks dynamics, try some more variation with velocity for your instruments/drum samples

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09-04-2013 15:15
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