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mattyb 
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Registration Date: 20-05-2010
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A new one I'm working on. Listened to it in my car, I think the bass needs to come down a bit, the highs could come down, either bring the pads and guitars up or drop the volume on the beat a little. Not bad for the basic stRucture just needs transition work and some more bells and whistles.
Matty B - Watermind
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20-03-2013 14:16 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Just running drums and a subbass?
Where are the basslines?
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20-03-2013 23:32 |
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Subkinetik
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Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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Sounds a little bit incomplete on the first part, after the drop, without any synths or modulation on the sub bass. Also i think the high end of the snare needs lowering a little bit, it's really too hissy, maybe try layering another less hissy snare or clap (with the low end EQed out) to replicate the high end of it. The hats are a little overbearing at the moment too, but i think thats more of a decebel issue that an eq issue. Also it's a little repetative with the same notes being playerd over and over again. Apart from that i think it's well structured, and got a nice vibe to it. Nice one
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21-03-2013 21:38 |
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reckless
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Missing sub movement. I think you should try to get the mix levels a bit better, the snare is to loud. Try to put a mid range bass in your song
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22-03-2013 13:03 |
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