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JacksonP JacksonP is a male
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Take a listen to my latest DnB track and let me know what you think!

Constructive criticism and advice will be appreciated!

Thanks!

JDP - The Imaginary Part

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13-03-2013 00:48
QBM
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Really nice track loving the warm bass even though it is some what lacking in melody terms. Think It would sound nice if you went up or down a few notes at the end of each other bar or something just to make it more interesting nice drums though. Think the intro drums could be better eqed in the intro as they stand out too much in the mix. Keep at it and post any updates. If you could also leave constructive criticism on my music it would be a real help Smile

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by QBM: 14-03-2013 13:06.
14-03-2013 13:04
JacksonP JacksonP is a male
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Thanks! Will definitely try focusing more on a melody with this one.

I've been following you on Soundcloud for a while. Winter lights is awesome, really catchy melody. Tends to get stuck in my head...in a good way Smile Great work!

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17-03-2013 06:48
Subkinetik Subkinetik is a male
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Agree with QBM about the variation in the notes. Dunno if it's my speakers but the intro sounds fine to me. Sounds well mastered in my opinion, just could use a little variation to keep the track interesting.

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18-03-2013 18:57 Homepage of Subkinetik
JacksonP JacksonP is a male
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Thanks, I'm just winging it as far as mastering goes...I don't really know what I'm doing when it comes to that haha. Will work on the variation. I agree, it is a bit repetitive.

Thanks for the advice.

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19-03-2013 04:07
QBM
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Thanks mate means alot to hear you like it seems to have gone down really well. Everyone seems to like mine or hosinis remix which is mint and would recomend checking his work out. Been working on a dubstep VIP for it which I will be posting up soon but I've got some crappy headphones atm as most peeps can tell from my latest wips lol oh well ill get back on top on it all soon enough. Subkinetik might well be right about the intro but its just the way it sounds on my headphones so take his word for it. Keep up the great work. Look forward to hearing big things from you.

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20-03-2013 02:18
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