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25-02-2013 12:47 |
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Subkinetik
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Nice track. That snare sounds a little dry, maybe try putting an extra layer or some reverb on it. Also the bass that comes in half way through is a little overpowering in comparison to the subtle sub you had going in the first half. Sounded really out of place when it kicked in. I wouldnt turn it down though, id turn the sub in the first half up, and automate it to bring it's level back down when the second sub kicks in. This track could also use a little variation with the notes. It's pretty much the same all the way through. Apart from that its a pretty decent liquid track. Keep going at it mate
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18-03-2013 19:15 |
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Originally posted by Subkinetik
Nice track. That snare sounds a little dry, maybe try putting an extra layer or some reverb on it. Also the bass that comes in half way through is a little overpowering in comparison to the subtle sub you had going in the first half. Sounded really out of place when it kicked in. I wouldnt turn it down though, id turn the sub in the first half up, and automate it to bring it's level back down when the second sub kicks in. This track could also use a little variation with the notes. It's pretty much the same all the way through. Apart from that its a pretty decent liquid track. Keep going at it mate |
Thanks, that's great feedback. Now I know what to improve. Sub is always a bit tricky to work on
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21-03-2013 10:32 |
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Subkinetik
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Cool, glad i could help. Any chance of a review on the track i posted?
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21-03-2013 21:50 |
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Vehemence
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the dramatic switching back an forth for the panning can be distracting, also its a bit repetitive, keep working on it though man!
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09-04-2013 15:18 |
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1 - 10 I give it a 7. It has a nice chilled bassline, nice drums.
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26-05-2013 18:03 |
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