 hedset - bass invaders |
hedset
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'bass invaders' and post your comments here!!!
this track i put together in a matter of days, although its not finished, i wanted to post it up and see what you guys think about it so i could finally finish it, maybe someone in here would like to collaborate with me with this one (im running out of ideas,lol) thanks everyone
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16-09-2004 21:56 |
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MINION 
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
Posts: 8
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huh 
suddenly a new tune during my posts?
lets grab this.
Luv the intro idea, half time beat, nice one
then suddenly that cut up break, which I like
maybe the backward drums on top of them sound a bit messy
good melody line when the tune drops but maybe give the melody line less low and a bit more mid.
oh, try to lower the reece like bass synth, or try to widen it up, it sounds a bit harsh over the drums.
maybe try a fuzz or distortion but be carefull, it sounds quite distorted now. not a bad thing, but it could use a sort of airbrush that thickens it.
twists and cuts in the drums are nice!!
I like it, can i play it out?
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by MINION: 16-09-2004 22:16.
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16-09-2004 22:14 |
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Dave_Akuma
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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i think maybe you could've introduced the fast break a little better, gave it more of a 'tease' so that it's not such a harsh transition when it comes in...maybe add some percussion to the half-time beat that can help tie them together a bit...got some good sounds in here...the part when you bring in that reece, it might work out better if you were to copy the sub, throw a hi-pass filter on it, throw some distortion on it, so that the distorted reece won't feel so out of place and sudden, cuz it just sorta comes out of nowhere...with some more tweaking this can turn out to be a solid tune... 
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16-09-2004 22:40 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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yow yow yow,
WWL.
sharp trebled hats int the beginning ( a bit too). messy drop. much interference of sounds at the same frequencies. EQ mate!!! stays a bit the same. you need some variation in a hectical beat like this.after the break things improve a little. But theres still to little fullness to talk about a song. Compression and EQ primary ad some sounds and basses secondary!!!
keep it up
cheers
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17-09-2004 11:52 |
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Surya
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Like the drums in the intro. Nice
Good switching to the amen too.
The melody here is a tad too loud though
Drop: maybe you should replace the sine bass with a more pumping bassline to give more drive?
The drums are good though, they do have drive and stuff. Maybe give a bit more body to them, they sound a bit thin.
Drop @ 3.36: rough bassline sounds a bit too digital: dirty it up a bit!
The track sounds a bit empty when it's not playing too, throw something in there to fill it up a bit.
Overall the track lacks sub and the drums sound a bit thin.
2.5/5
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25-09-2004 17:59 |
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The latter bass (reece-like) is quite dull.