GiMP-DJ - COVERT OPERATIONS |
GiMP-DJ
DJ-BAKA

Registration Date: 05-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'COVERT OPERATIONS' and post your comments here!!!
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16-09-2004 18:52 |
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MINION
Newbie
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
Posts: 8
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Fan of ASC's label?
tune starts of nice, cool raves, good deep bass
but your drums are like 3 times as quiet as the other sounds
drop can use some extra power, but thats not really a comment, i like ez drops. it doens't have to be in your face all the time.
maybe try to spread the rave sample over a few keyranges. sometimes it sounds to pitched down or pitched up. maybe this was intended to sound this way. it's no big thing, just a personal oppinion.
an extra lead to guide the tune would do no harm i guess.
good roller with dubby/hardcore influences
but can use an workover on the sound if i can be so bold.
ps. that sudden stop with the delay/echo works fine
__ My signature is my best friend, i must master it as i must master my life. without me my signature is useless, without my signature i am useless.
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16-09-2004 21:40 |
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Dave_Akuma
Wicked Producer
 

Registration Date: 02-12-2003
Posts: 400
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not really fond of the sub bass--the way it is, it's really hard to hear the different notes, alot of times it almost sounds like just one really long note or something, maybe play with the attack time a bit....yeah, i agree that maybe another lead of somekind would help to carry the tune a bit more, and you won't have to rely so much on that one rave stab....with a bit more work, this might turn out to be a solid tune...
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16-09-2004 22:54 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
  

Registration Date: 29-06-2004
Posts: 643
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hey there mate,
once again you have some really good ideas and feeling for DnB. like terror noises alot but the EQ of the riddim section needs some work (or is it the masterchannel). It is allready better then the last one 'imagine yourself'. you should put some attention into liitle flashy tranzy sphery sounds. it could give a whole new dimension to it. 2.75/5
cheers
__ muphasta none dnb
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17-09-2004 11:42 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good selection of hoovers, like them. But the how you use them is a bit weird.
You buidl the track around your sub, which is kinda muffled. Make it pump a bit more. And you use the hoovers to add some variation or something. I think it would be better to do something more intresting with the hoovers and build the track around that.
Drums are quite decent but the soundquality of them can be improved: more punchy and more brilliance to make them sound less lofi.
2.5/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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25-09-2004 19:20 |
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