drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Just another Review please :') Just another Review please :') Author Post itex Tourist Registration Date: 04-08-2010 Posts: 13 Heya mates, please rate my tune This version is with vocals http://soundcloud.com/itexmusic/itex-mor...un-original-mix please post me all the bad stuff about it cheers 18-08-2012 19:33 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Reviewed on SoundCloud __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 19-08-2012 10:31 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  I have to agree: work on the sync of the vocal, and you still have quite a bit to learn about song structure. Your drops don't have any impact at all. You can't just play something, and add some drums to that with no other transitional elements and expect to have a great drop. __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 19-08-2012 10:38 djchavez21 Tourist Registration Date: 17-10-2011 Posts: 30 Helpfulness rating:  IN THE BEGINNING IT SOUNDS LIKE THE VELOCITY OF THE PIANO IS TO MUCH OR THE ATTACK NEEDS TO BE SLIGHTLY RAISED. PROPER BUILD UP AND DROPS MUCH NEEDED. COULDN'T REALLY HEAR MUCH BASS EITHER. WOULD BE A NICE CHILL TRACK WITH THOSE VOCALS IF DONE CORRECTLY. LET YOUR DROPS HIT HARD WITH BASS AS HIGH AS YOU CAN GET THEM WITHOUT CLIPPING SO THEY DELIVER. 21-08-2012 01:42 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Just another Review please :')