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Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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This is my latest tune. Please have a listen and tell me what you think.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=424050&T=2571
"This sound is a champion."
Please leave a review and I'll get promiss to give a listen to your tunes.
James
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12-09-2004 03:37 |
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Isis-sama 
Tourist
Registration Date: 08-09-2004
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Nice tune. Not my style, but it sounds good 
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The faster, harder, dirtier, the better!www.mobettatech.com KAITEN IS ME (its trickery!)
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12-09-2004 05:29 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite a lot of compression on the drums, you can clearly hear the pumpin of the hats: not good, turn it down a bit.
Hats are nice and crips but lack some body imo, layer them with some phatter sounding hats too.
Kick kicks nicely though.
Don't really like the echo or delay on teh whole drums part though.
Sub is nice and warm.
Vocals sound like you just threw them in here and there to add some variation, but they're not used very constructively imo.
Pitching up hoover is quite nice, but try introducing it better.
Your sub varies in volume a bit too during the track, sometimes overpowering the rest.
The overcompressing is very hearable throughout the whole track, so you'll have to work on that.
Sorry, but I can't call this a good track. The structure isn't very thought out, there's no real buildup or anything like that, you just alternate between sounds a bit, but that doesn't give the track a story...
And your sound needs work... and less compression
1.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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23-09-2004 12:29 |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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ya i compress every sound i get into, what would you recommend. just compress the bass , the lead synths and drums? i liked the delay reverb on the drums, i'll keep that shit. i make tunes off the top of my head, fitting sounds in that work. i cant really stand to hold the tune to one thing. i make sure the tune progresses along the way. call me a IDM DNB head, but i cant stand for the monotony of DNB track layouts. on the floor its one thing, at home or in the car its another.
p's
james 
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23-09-2004 22:13 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Yeah, I see what you mean, and I hear that in your tracks... so it's just a matter of what you're trying to accomplish... And I'm more of a straight DnB head, so that's why I comment in that direction... Sorry if I sound to harsh by doing that.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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23-09-2004 22:45 |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
Posts: 81
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IMO: In My Opinion
IDM:Independent Dance Music
meaning that it does not really confrom to any one style through out,. think herbalizer, Aphex Twin
thanks for the comments,
o the bass
its there, deep deep subbaselines
james
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24-09-2004 22:10 |
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