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itex
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Hey mates. My other thread got ignored so i try the goldrush again with my latest work
Track is called Atmosphere .

http://soundcloud.com/itexmusic/itex-atmosphere-nephilist


please rate how it is . no mercy okay ?

cheers


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Also , if someone wants to ask stuff , please feel free.
btw :
i use ableton for the main stuff but mixdown is done in Logic Pro .
I am working with a mac. Samples used in this tune are 1# Indivision Kickback break ( the snare ) #2 Snare number 2 is taken from c64 pack

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06-08-2012 23:30
Surya Surya is a male
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Intro is quite nice. The sidechain with the kick is a bit overdone if you ask me though.

Drop: bigger than I expected, but I would prefer the drums to be a bit more prominent in the mix. And add some more edits and variations to the drums at the end over some bars to switch things up a bit.

Otherwise a quite decent roller.

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07-08-2012 09:21 Homepage of Surya
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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In the drop your 4th bass note of each bar is on the edge of going off tone.
Subs have that to them, so not to worry. You might want to use a second version of the sub which you retune to get that note spot on.

Tune sounds nice in general, I feel somethings missing though, it needs some extra layer or vocals.

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07-08-2012 15:41 Homepage of BattleDrone
M.O.A.B. M.O.A.B. is a male
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Yeah, i likes that.
Think it needs maybe somthing in the middle of the frequensies (other than the drums, they are v nice btw) - its mostly sub and top. I listened on in ear headphones so its pretty hard to tell. You could play the sub part on anuther vst aswell to beef it up a bit. Just an idea. Nice work tho.
Cheers.
14-09-2012 03:48
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