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Please check out my new track 'Dunkelheit' and post your comments here!
Hey all! It's been a while since I've uploaded a song on the mighty dnb.be. I feel like I've gotten a lot better since past songs and I'm proud of this one! I never thought I'd be able to make a good sounding neurofunk track, but I put myself to it and this is what came out! Enjoy and thanks in advance for the constructive criticism!
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by JumplnTheFire: 14-05-2012 03:22.
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14-05-2012 03:13 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
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Basses are too dirty, go easy on the distortion and turn them down a little.
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14-05-2012 21:09 |
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shir_pan
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breakdown before the buildup sounds a little empty for me (at the beginning). drop is nice, drums work well for me. would like to hear some more elements overall in the tune (but thats also taste). the variations in the leadbass could be more pointed out to me, maybe by reducing the distortion (relating to BDs comment). overall i can feel it definitely, just needs some working out imo.
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22-05-2012 16:51 |
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