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Mesia
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Registration Date: 07-09-2004
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07-09-2004 07:47 |
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miki 
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Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
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Melting Point>
Quite quiet production, pay attention on drums volume, mainly snare and bass drum. they're silent. bass synth is fine. I think rides in the end of the track are loud. 3/5
Red planet>
drums are good, i like them, effects and synths are amazing, melodies are good made, nothing else to say about this.
also 3/5
Jade>
i like the vocals, maybe that synth pad is a bit loud and that trancy melody is loud too, turn it down a bit and it would be great. I like this track more than others, this one is the best, great melodies too.
3/5
I don't know but try to limit the tracks to +12db and that louder elements to less.
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MiKi
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by miki: 07-09-2004 15:15.
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07-09-2004 15:15 |
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Milis
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Registration Date: 05-09-2004
Posts: 7
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08-09-2004 09:30 |
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Mesia
Newbie
Registration Date: 07-09-2004
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Cheers guys!!!! Appreciate the fact you took the time to listen to my tunes........melting point is a bit of a throwaway, I completely fucked the EQ one night when I was too blazed, and saved over the orig!!!!! You''l definatley hear that vocal sample pop up again in another tune, its very airy and psychadelicand I dont think melting point did it justice 
again, cheerz, and I'll be back with some new tunes is a couple of weeks, and trust, it will be worth checking out
peace
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/mesiamusic.htm
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08-09-2004 10:37 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Red Planet:
Not too fond of the sounds in the intro, but thats personal taste.
Drums sound quite nice and natural, good work on those. They could use some slight re-EQing though imo.
Reece is nice, especially after it drops with the bass in it.
I like the dreamy sounds, but I'd rather use them in an intro or breakdown, not in a body part.
Nicely produced, but it does sound a bit empty overall.
3/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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23-09-2004 12:00 |
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AlexOne
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
Posts: 10
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You've done the epic trancey bit quite well, but i think your drums aren't beefy enough, send 'em thru a bit of distortion or overdrive. Not really into the lead melody you've got, but there's nothing wrong with the way it sounds. U mainly need to work on fattening those beats, and maybe adding some higher harmonics to your sub (overdrive or warm compression), 'cos it's not very audible
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23-09-2004 15:06 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Melting Point:
Nice intro.
Don't really like the ravey stuff, the melody sounds a bit too cheap. Dunno what I dislike about it. But it's not really 'bad'.
Buildup: like the filtering on the lead.
Drop: hmmm, needs way more power. The poblem are your drums: they need to be louder, they need more punch and your hats sound like you got them from a cheap dancetune. Snare needs to be a bit more smashing too.
So I think that's what you need to work on most in this track: your drums. They just don't have the power. They sound a bit cheap too. So work on that. The drums are VERY important to your track!
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-09-2004 17:53 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Jade:
Good intro, drums are quite good. Maybe use fatter hihats?
I hear the Ram Trylogy - Screamer introsound from Absynth
Like that sound, so that's nice.
The nervous synth melody it a bit too nervous for my taste. Maybe go easy on the delay there?
New, more trancey theme coming in. It's quite nice, together with those dreamy atmospherics.
Ah, reece coming in. Quite good although it sounds a bit lofi. But the melody does the trick.
Drop: drums lack a bit of power. They sound a bit thin, make them phatter and pump more.
And the sound is clipped here, which is a pity.
Structure is quite good, although the buildups and drops could do with a bit more tention.
3/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound and mixdown
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-09-2004 11:50 |
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blal
Newbie
Registration Date: 15-10-2004
Posts: 5
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Red Planet
hmm 3/5
not sure about your lead chords. nice spooky sounds, I think your beat 
is a bit too loud compared to bass and tune,
and you could add more sub frequencies, well done tho I LIKE THE IDEA!
and vocals r q cool.
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check
http://http://www.demostreams.com/?ID=blal
for my darkside drum and bass
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15-10-2004 13:07 |
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