Great vocals in there, love the concept behind this track. the kick is a bit too heavy on the build up and stands out way too much compared to the rest of the track. build up lacks a bit of tension the drop lacks some punch. maybe try a moment of silence with just the vocals before dropping it. the bass at 2:12 is sick, but the track as a whole sounds to me like its lacking sub. try that droney sub an octave lower maybe and then EQ the kick above it instead of below it to stop it from messing with the sub. also the synth you layered on the bass (or the high end of the filter sweep) sounds a bit dry to me but thats just my opinion. id try putting a high passed reverb or delay on it, high passed to stop it messing with the sub elements and maybe widened a bit more in the mix.
If anything im nit picking because apart from the intro, it sounds very dry to me and could use some extra elements to it.
Great use of effects throughout, good variation and great structure. Keep at it, its a great track
Thanks Subkinetik, really helpfull !
As for the sub, my main bass synth has a very low frequency so I didn't quite put a sub seperately because I thought I would be to crowdy and mess things up.
Plus I don't have a great audio set up (my headphone's bass is raised)
Maybe with some proper EQ'ing I could do it.
The rest of your suggestions are totally right, I'll get to work!
Thanks man
The intro was very nice! Very euphoric vibes make you wana smile! Reminds me slightly of Betrayed (Intraspekt Remix) by Technikore & Minty. The vocal sample is a good addition to the build up however with such a nice intro I woulda thought a more bang in your face drop would make this tune better. This may not be the sound youre going for though, however overall really nice track! look forward to hearing more.
great vocal in the intro, bass is sounding warm and inviting
maybe have the kicks filter in during the drops. the volume of the kicks make the actual drop seem weak.
the track sounds really good. only thing is i think the bass drowns the kick a bit (apart from during the kick drum rolls) the kick needs to be about 80% as powerful as in the rolls for the whole track. . side chain or EQ that bad boy!
