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mattyb 
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Please check out my new track 'Klutz Demo' and post your comments here!
A few hours work on this new thing i started. Def digging how it's coming so far. I noticed it follows the same formula as most of my stuff but i still dig it. Needs a lot of work, some parts where things get a bit overcrowded but as stated it's only got a few hours in it so far.
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22-03-2012 07:44 |
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Altodnb
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Decent track man. I like that synth that comes in around 1.22.Will be interested to see what this is like when you have finished.
Maybe work on the structure of it a bit more, and i feel the drums are a tad to loud in the mix, but that's just my opinion
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23-03-2012 08:33 |
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Vikt0r
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this track feels a bit empty, you could improve it by adding some elements and some more variation
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25-03-2012 18:20 |
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mattyb
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it def needs variation, i'm only an hour or so in to it. so a lot of the tweaks, transitions and whatnot are'nt there yet. aren't there yet
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25-03-2012 18:55 |
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krimmie2
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You did this in an hour? nice work dude. The bas is very smooth. I would lower your drums a bit and add some nice melodic elements. I'm curious to hear what comes out of it !
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25-03-2012 19:22 |
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BattleDrone
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Like the main break, the clap is really on steroids :-) Good intro, thinks stay mysterious all the way.
DnB is pretty formulaic, so not to worry about that.
The synth that is going on from 1:30 (it's there before but more in the background) is not helping, it sounds muffled and doesn't have a clear structure. Before 1:30 I thought I heard some "talking crowd" in your mix. I would redo this synth, extend the breakdown, do a nice buildup and make a second drop and you are ready with a good tune!
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26-03-2012 13:28 |
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Subkinetik
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Nice progressive sounding track. Had to really turn up my sub to hear the bass elements and then i found the sub bass was being distorted a bit at some points. not sure if its just cos the notes are too low in octave or weather the hoover sound is slightly distorting it. try high passing the hoover at about 300 - 400hz, or maybe bring the sub up an octave. this is pretty good for an hours work. big ups
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28-03-2012 16:22 |
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xGranty
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there seems like there is a few ideas mixed into one here? Maybe try refining it to just one or two of those ideas. The intro has a nice liquid vibe to it which would sound good to me just layered further as you did in the drop just with maybe some pads and a smoother bassline? thats how I would like to see the track role mate! any way I like the drum work, sounds really clear even around the bass, I especially like the shuffle it really ties the kick and snare together! look forward to hearing what else you do to this track! Big up!
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31-03-2012 15:48 |
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shir_pan
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synth at 1.31 feels out-of-key/weird or smth for me? drums roll nicely. for the fast hats (@1.38&1.59) id put some more dynamics in the velocity. track has a nice feel, somehow missing the central element/idea. but for a few hours its a good base to go from 
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09-04-2012 13:07 |
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SKINLEY
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Kick needs a boost between 40-60, snare needs it round 200-250 too.The hoover and baseline aren't in the same key, it sounds off, unless you meant to do it for a nastier feel, but it doesn't work. Usually like your stuff man but not feeling this one
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22-04-2012 23:38 |
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