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Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Please check out my new track 'Skydive' and post your comments here!
Hi Guys,
Long time away from the forum and producing as well.
Not so much time to sit and enjoy making sounds lately.
Anyway, please have a listen to something I finished recently and let me know what you think.
Comments as always appreciated.
Cheers.
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04-03-2012 01:12 |
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Silentvibe
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04-03-2012 12:26 |
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04-03-2012 20:12 |
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BattleDrone
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In the drop the organ isn't in sync with the drums and I would EQ it differently because it is clashing with the bass.
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05-03-2012 08:47 |
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k!llabyte
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Hey really like the 80s vibe you got going on nice drone bass lines but battledrone is right about the organ though, it is slightly out of time, if its an audio sample try time stretching it or if its a MIDI sample check your time signature matches the rest of the track.
its the bit that goes daa daa daa, da da da daa daa daa
You could try daa daa daa, da d dada daa daa daa
Probably makes no sense but i know i mean lol
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05-03-2012 19:10 |
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k!llabyte
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Hey really like the 80s vibe you got going on nice drone bass lines but battledrone is right about the organ though, it is slightly out of time, if its an audio sample try time stretching it or if its a MIDI sample check your time signature matches the rest of the track.
its the bit that goes daa daa daa, da da da daa daa daa
You could try daa daa daa, da d dada daa daa daa
Probably makes no sense but i know i mean lol
http://soundcloud.com/killabytednb
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05-03-2012 19:12 |
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Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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05-03-2012 20:42 |
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shir_pan
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agree on the out-of-sync organ.
intro could be more interesting for me.
drop works dope, really flowing style (aside the organ-sync)
liking the drums
great sound at 2.17!
id maybe highcut the bass more, leaving only the sub?
some more work on this and there will be roller 
cheers
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05-03-2012 23:53 |
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HI Shir,
Thanks for the feedback, I'm defo sitting this weekend and putting all ideas and tips in to the tune, Thanks again.
cheers.
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06-03-2012 06:59 |
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09-03-2012 20:26 |
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Dub Bananez
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I agree with the timingof the organ. The drumz can be a little heavier. Exp the kick. Maybe add a mid-low layer. Like the classic sounds used. Keep at it!
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11-03-2012 08:05 |
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Paracyte
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Hi
It is fixed now, did you listen the soundcloud version ?
Thanks for the feedback !
Cheers.
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11-03-2012 17:35 |
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Vikt0r
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nice i like the sound in here!
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25-03-2012 18:28 |
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xGranty
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Nice bouncy jumps ! really like the melody/mood behind this one. The drop was really nice man got me nodding my head lol one of my favourite elements was the delayed kinda rhode thing which you can hear at 4:20 for example
Not much creative criticism to give really, really enjoyed the track! Big ups!
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