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saphir saphir is a male

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hey

it's been a while
soi pointed me to post it so... Shocked

en em at vis gegete

some say the vocal is overused but
misteries in my life just forced me to use it.

sad & positive at the same given moment

feel free to wank it through your player
cheers

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by saphir: 30-08-2004 21:51.

30-08-2004 21:50

Qbit

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neat bassline, neat breakz... awful synths! it's all good, but damn, those synths (padz) sound so cheesy. Try a different patch, or another synth (or spectrasonics atmosphere, that has the best padz). that's the only remark, the rest sounds oki doki.

cheerz

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30-08-2004 22:11

saphir saphir is a male

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synths as in the violins sounds?

i guess so,

yep i know, still rearching a proper clip.

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30-08-2004 22:13

Soi

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Haha!!
You moron! Big Grin

Just so you know:
'Zijn aars is prductiever dan den bizniz van tegewurgt'

Ok, you simply forced me to try to give comment on the track with an attitude that will freeze a random regular housepet in 1 nanosecond!
I like the melanchloy a lot, it reminded me instantly to a couple of tracks on the Aphex Twin 'Richard D. James' album, BUT!!!! ( Tongue

this is funnnn!!) the strings are a bit, shall we say, cheesy? Maybe the strings would come out clearer and more real when, euh, real strings could be used. But then again, you're not Adam F nor Goldie (yet) (i still managed to sneak in some celebrity-association-tactic) Where was I, ah yeah, the female vocals.....taptap.....hmmmm....scratch.....hmmmm....... don't like 'm that much BUTT!!!!! (here we go again) they're exquisitly produced! The spectral analyser temporarily blinded me with it's vast array of spectral colours!!! Oh, what a beauty!!! No, it fits quite well with the atmosphere of the song, actually.
And as usual, the drums + basses are top notch. I kid not, and in your other tracks they're even better.
You seem to like these rhytmical multitudes. Gives the song a drive to say 'You' to. (pffffff)
Let it be further downloaded, commented and appreciated!
Bigup

Jos pushes 'stop' button.
Big Grin

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30-08-2004 22:21

Qbit

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quote:

Originally posted by saphir
synths as in the violins sounds?

yeh

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30-08-2004 22:33

Marsh

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hey man what u saying awful synths for, i quite like this sound.
nice tune bro
the vocals fit in nicely and thats a good bassline aswell

31-08-2004 13:54

Qbit

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quote:

Originally posted by Marsh
hey man what u saying awful synths for, i quite like this sound.

euhm, because it's my opinion? And apparently Soi feels the same way.

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31-08-2004 14:37

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quality stuff man !
like the idea very much
the drums are too wicked, could maybe use a lil ...:/ "rounder" sound, some mid-hi boost or something like that ? but then again these are too crappy speakers to comment on that

really like the vocal haha Big Grin

the string arrangement needs a lil spicing up i think, just in arranging i mean
and offcourse the sound of the strings is awful but i guess you know that Big Grin

but it's really rockin man, imo just needs a lil touch of ... arff, can't come up with a good word for it ... fragilitée ? Smile

girl boy girl boy girl boy girl boy Wink

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31-08-2004 15:57

saphir saphir is a male

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cheers ya'll

i do know about the sound of the violins pad, but i luv it, though i defo need a better patch/clip, whatever to spice the melody of it up.

about the fragil factor of the tune, i am trying to alter the modest riffs in the tune into an even dryer riff. sounds pretty abrubt but that's finetuning

greetings!

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31-08-2004 16:36

saphir saphir is a male

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) shameless bump Tongue

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02-09-2004 16:58

AcidMonkey AcidMonkey is a male

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Nice.

The violin synth stuff - hmmm, like it in some ways but I do understand what people are saying. Try throwing it through some heavy effects to disguise it a bit. (Distortion? Phaser?)

The vocal is too erm, familiar is the best term I could use - not always a bad thing.

02-09-2004 17:07

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Yeah, the strings are a bit cheasy, but does that have to be a negative thing? I think it's quite allright, although the sound could be a tad warmer if I had to decide...

Vocal: not overused, but shouldn't be used more, that's for sure.

Nice bassline

Drums sound kinda familiar... dunno from where, but I do recognise them from somewhere... But they're nice!

Track is a bit too long imo, I would tighten it up a bit...

Soundquality is nice, but some brilliance is missing. Maybe bring in some crisp sounding ride or something to fill up the gap above 10khz...

3.5/5, could go up in future versions.

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05-09-2004 16:32

miki

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i like the pad, it's so cheasy Big Grin

vocals are great, synth is good, hmm sure good effects, i like them.
about production side of track: so profesional ...

4/5 maybe more

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08-09-2004 22:23

wicked_wayz wicked_wayz is a male

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really enjoyed it, great moods and build-up, nice effects, bassline etc. Vocal reminded me of something else, immediatley sung...blabla like a thief in the night... Is that the rest of the lyrics? Can't put a title on it. anyway, like it very much.

perhaps the drums could use some more presence i think, bit stronger, more mid's...sound a bit muffled

give us some more Smile

09-09-2004 13:45

saphir saphir is a male

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cheers

vocal line comes from Julie Mcknight's finally track.

code:
1: 2: 3: 4:	you , you who make worlds collide I knew you'd come knocking one day, unannounced like a thief in the night

for some special reasons, the lyrics and WHO sang this, fitted extremely well with the emotions that made me build this one Bigup

thanx for listening & feedback.
next time in your ears on the floor!

boh

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by saphir: 14-09-2004 08:58.

14-09-2004 08:57

saphir saphir is a male

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bump, taking this one down by the end of this week

if anyone wants to pick it up and play it...
contact me! Bigup

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by saphir: 21-09-2004 16:45.

21-09-2004 16:45

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