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I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE


Registration Date: 02-08-2011
Posts: 17


Please check out my new track 'Liiined' and post your comments here!

new drum and bass track i made, tell me whar to think what to improve cheers!
27-02-2012 16:16 Homepage of I Am Nowhere
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Intro could flow more (I wanted to skip forward).
The break in the intro seems to follow it's own tempo.
The drop is muffled, especially the break, which is too silent. The vocal is repeated too often.
The little breakdown is weird and off rhythm.
The main breakdown is not keeping my attention.
The whole thing sounds like it needs some more elements.
Same feedback for the second drop.


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27-02-2012 20:35 Homepage of BattleDrone
I Am Nowhere
I AM NOWHERE


Registration Date: 02-08-2011
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I just listened to it through my speakers and it sounds horrible! sorry bout that i am gonna change it quite alot, go back to scratching board, thanks for listening however.
27-02-2012 20:51 Homepage of I Am Nowhere
Vikt0r Vikt0r is a male
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Registration Date: 02-03-2011
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nice i like it but the track definitely needs more high-end especially the drums try to add some hi-passed hats and rides/cymbals I love the half-time breakdown!
25-03-2012 18:31 Homepage of Vikt0r
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