 JacksonP - Avoid |
JacksonP 
Luminosity
Registration Date: 09-12-2010
Posts: 41
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Please check out my new track 'Avoid' and post your comments here!
I've been working on this over the past week, I'm pretty happy with it right now, the structure was kind of rushed (never any time to produce :[ )
hope you like it !
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https://soundcloud.com/jacksonparaluch
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10-02-2012 23:36 |
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NOETIX
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Registration Date: 26-01-2012
Posts: 3
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Very nice intro. Definate Banger. Loving the Bassline. Would definately play it if I had had it. Bassline is Briliant. Loads of depth.
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10-02-2012 23:55 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
Posts: 394
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Some very nice bass edits!!! The drumz are alright with a nice amount of weight. The only thing I would consider changing is some of the pads. Cheers.
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http://www.monkeydub.com/
http://www.indajunglerecording.com
http://soundcloud.com/dub-bananez
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11-02-2012 09:42 |
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recon47
Recon
Registration Date: 05-01-2009
Posts: 169
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Good punchy drums. you need to inject more low end coz it aint shaking me. The pad doesnt fit to the rest of the tune, youve got quite a funky feel to it and the pads dont work. love the mid range work in the bass tho.
More sub and blend the mix a touch and you got a winner!
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11-02-2012 10:33 |
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shir_pan
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
Posts: 205
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liking the intro-pads, nice buildup. was expecting a more liquid tune after the drop, but this way it works as well. cool pitchbend. midbass sounds little too stereo on my headphones (may be my taste?). missing some hats etc at the breakdown (~2.12). personally i prefer the first buildup 
liking the drums. very sweet tune all in all!
cheers
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http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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13-02-2012 21:07 |
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Silentvibe
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Registration Date: 04-03-2012
Posts: 5
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04-03-2012 12:28 |
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NO183R9
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Registration Date: 12-03-2012
Posts: 7
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cool vibe on the intro.
very wide sound.
not hugely keen on the reece, goes on a bit. Could do with a bit more variation perhaps?
reckon a little disco loop/sample in there would set this off nicely and add the extra bit of energy i think it needs.
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12-03-2012 11:27 |
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