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Sensa 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Vengance ' and post your comments here!!!
edit by thechronic: track removed for copyright violation
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www.revoltagerecordings.com
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Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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26-08-2004 20:03 |
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Dave_Akuma
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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hmmm...not sure if the vocal sample fits with the rest of the tune...the bassline, while ruff and gritty, had an almost uplifting, dare i say almost happy, melody that kinda clashes with what mr. jackson is saying...plus, i've heard that sample used way to many times before...other than that, tho, this is a pretty solid tune...nice modulation on the bassline...if it were me, i'd save that vocal sample for a really heavy and aggressive tune...
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26-08-2004 23:59 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Bassline kicks ass!!
But the vocal sample gets the same comment as Dave_Akuma's. Btw: copyright-issue?!?!? 
It seems that all i get are mids, there no subs and kicks, and the track lacks treble a bit.
The trance-leads get an out-of-context placement. Like that.
Drums are nice, but could use some extra attention on the eq'ing.
Almost a proper dancefloor track. 
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27-08-2004 00:56 |
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Surya
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Same comments as the other tune: EQ needs work, drums can use some thosts.
And Dave is right about the vocal: it's been used far too much before, just ditch it, you don't need it.
The track is VERY similar to the otherone, no? The melody is even very similar in some places, did you use the same base to start from? (done that too some times, no problem with that)
Second bassline is nice too.
Oh yeah, there are some 5hz-10hz frequencies in there, filter them out since they are unwanted 
There is almost no +15khz, maybe fix that too.
3.25/5
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27-08-2004 13:55 |
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BUKC
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Registration Date: 19-01-2004
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That second bassline is wicked mate! Apart from the fact that sample has been used too many times before, dido on the legal issues, I think it sounds quite phat in the track man! Beats are nice, a bit monotome in the buildups though(but that's just my opinion). The sound of the first bassline doesn't seem very original man. But apart from that, clearly a phat tune!
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02-09-2004 23:51 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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I had to remove this track, you're using copyrighted samples again! And even samples which have been the subject of law suits before, which make them extremely dangerous to use!!
Quentin Tarantino has sued many artists before for using samples of his films, most notably the track 'Scooby Snacks' by Fun Loving Criminals, they had to pay up 40% of their royalties just for using a sample of Pulp Fiction.
If (theoretically) you would put this track up on a couple of sites and it would be downloaded 1000 times you can expect to pay up $400 to him, even though you have never earned a single penny on the downloads. The judge will rule that the average price for legally downloading music is $1 per download (according to big online shops such as iTunes) and you owe 40% to Tarantino, according to previous law suits.
What is more likely is that I have to pay that, since I am the legal publisher and distributor. Well I'm not taking the risk.
Why don't you buy a microphone and make your own samples? Easy, orginal, and you can do whatever you like with your own samples!
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