 JacksonP - Not Even |
JacksonP 
Luminosity
Registration Date: 09-12-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Not Even' and post your comments here!
Made this track last last night and today. It needs more variation imo, not done yet. Your feedback will be greatly appreciated 
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https://soundcloud.com/jacksonparaluch
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22-01-2012 05:50 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Needs an intro and make the current stuff shorter.
You are doing fine, but the sub pattern is very repetitive. This makes the whole tune cry for variation although you have a lot of stuff going on. Make changes in the sub!
You make some sick build up towards the end... weird. Make the build up in front of a drop to create tension.
Mixdown/FX/master are really good!
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22-01-2012 14:17 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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drums could be a bit bigger for a track with this energy like some of the arped sounds some of them sound very basic tho if u know what i mean some more distortion prehaps good start finish it man
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23-01-2012 18:19 |
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SKINLEY
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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not into the square bass on the intro. If you're high passing your beats bring the cutoff down a touch, or layer more, the beats sound a little hollow. Kinda feelin the 2nd drop, your levels are pretty good, everything sits quite nicely. Not too busy, nice percusssion. Overall nice effort. Although I am a sucker for a melody!
PEACE
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24-01-2012 22:13 |
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earthking
Newbie
Registration Date: 25-01-2012
Posts: 5
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I should make an another intro or you fade it in because it starts to loud in my opinion. But very good tempo good dirty sounds. And you really go with the rythm. And I like the variation.
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25-01-2012 18:40 |
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recon47
Recon
Registration Date: 05-01-2009
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Needs an intro mate, use that arp to build into and work around it.
Some really slammin sounds in the house tho, not a fan of the gated arp tho.
KIK/SNR need more punch.
Arange is good and levels are pretty good.
As said before more variation too.
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27-01-2012 20:02 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
Posts: 394
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Can use an intro, like some of the sounds used. Mixdown can use some work, drumz can be heavier and the bass can be a tad deeper.
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http://www.indajunglerecording.com
http://soundcloud.com/dub-bananez
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28-01-2012 09:23 |
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