 krimmie2 - Frozen Consciousness |
krimmie2 
Producer
Registration Date: 25-04-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Frozen Consciousness' and post your comments here!
Hi, just finished this track, I hope u guys like it.
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19-01-2012 18:38 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Really nice stuff.
Second drop is hot too, I always like it when the second drop is able to hit me full.
Hihats could be a bit less robotic if you would add a tad of swing to them and change the levels a bit so they get a nice groove.
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20-01-2012 20:10 |
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Dub Bananez
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Like the intro, maybe a touch of verb on the snare in the intro. Love the drop, that HAT is not good. The sound is good, but what you need to do is have every other hat hit lower; then change the pattern slightly every other 2 bars, just an extra hit or tiny shuffle, this will make them sound more natural and give your snare more of the shuffle feel you are going for. Love the bass on the drop. Solid production. Z
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21-01-2012 10:27 |
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pusha
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like the biggie vocal drop ! the first bass you hear after the drop if u made that wider it would sound wkd like put some unison on it or summit or more voices on it if it has already good track mate
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23-01-2012 18:22 |
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SKINLEY
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Registration Date: 15-05-2011
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The two intro melodies are out of key. They clash. Maybe a touch more variation in the hats wouldn't go a miss. The bassline and synth dont really go with the intro either. Your overall sound is nice, but still lacking any real dynamics. You definitely have a decent base to work from, you just gotta work. If you struggle with melody matching, have a look at melodyne, also.
PEACE
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24-01-2012 21:57 |
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krimmie2
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Registration Date: 25-04-2011
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Hey guys, thanks for the tips.
@SKINLEY I do have trouble with melody matching 
thanks for the heads up!
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