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RaidaOne
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Registration Date: 21-08-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Unlock'd - Snowtime!' and post your comments here!
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http://soundcloud.com/raidaone
keep it up! 
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11-01-2012 20:15 |
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I like the dark tone of this track,it's pretty short but I take it this is only the intro.Nice fade in at the beginning.
The snare drum sounds a bit like a human beat boxing though and gives the track a feeling of smugness although I'm not sure if that was your intention.It works but eventually all I could picture was a guy with a mic shoved close to his lips and making the "ptum chica ptum" sound.Why not switch snares just when nobody expects it.
The drum fill at 00:44 gets a bit muddled and could be tightened up.Also a few cymbal crashes will add moments of impact.
The bass at the end really came together nicely but ended too soon.
Sorry to bitch man but this is my first review.4 more and I can upload a track for you to rip to pieces.
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12-01-2012 11:48 |
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RaidaOne
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Registration Date: 21-08-2011
Posts: 40
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yea its only a preview i dont know, why its not said in the title.. the track is far from finished and i appreciate your opinion 
thanks.. and trust me i wont if theres nothing to rip
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http://soundcloud.com/raidaone
keep it up!
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12-01-2012 17:24 |
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doolhoofd
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Registration Date: 02-03-2011
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Snare sounds muffled and needs more high-end.
Growl is really good.
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.:::GENERATIONS PASS:::.
.:::CIVILISATIONS DIE:::.
.:::THE BLiNK OF AN EYE:::.
.:::IN GALACTIC TIME:::.
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12-01-2012 18:57 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Liking! Finish it.
The snare in the intro could have a bit more low end.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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12-01-2012 20:23 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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Like that bass a lot, the mixdown is a bit on the dry side, the snare can use some trail. You can try to do a filtered distorion layer of the same snare with very slight small room reverb to give it a little more flavor and depth. Also tune the FX sounds and highs up when you limit and export.
Like it so far.
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http://www.indajunglerecording.com
http://soundcloud.com/dub-bananez
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16-01-2012 11:07 |
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