Dave_Akuma 
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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a little light for my tastes, but i can still appreciate the softer stuff every now and then...since you said it isn't mastered or anything, i won't really comment on the levels and stuff...got some great drum edits in here...i like how you didn't bring in the sub bass till a bit after the first drop...the half-time part in the middle was a nice surprise...pretty good for an un-mastered experiment... 
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27-08-2004 00:12 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Organs and bleeps are nice.
Drums don't feel to natural, though. They sound hectic and nervous. I get the idea you're trying to achieve, but maybe you should play around a bit with velocities, quantizers 'n stuff like that. A second snare (otherwise pitched) could be useful.
Oh, yeah, and beware... drum'n'BASS... where's the bass? *screams out for more basssss!!!*
It could make your track feel much warmer.
I like the style, though, dubby to evolve into smt funkier. Maybe you can fix the drum-issue with a nice edited loop?
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27-08-2004 00:50 |
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Surya
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Not too fond of the snare you use.
Kick sounds quite digital, don't like that either. Use a real kick.
Boost the bassline man, it's way too quiet!
Some nice sounds, melodies are OK
Overall the track sounds quite empty and minimal.
2.25/5
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27-08-2004 14:00 |
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Dee
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Registration Date: 13-09-2004
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The snare sounds terrible which seemed to kill the track for me and i also found it to be a bit empty and not enough changes at all !
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14-09-2004 04:10 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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WWL.
yo yo yo,
snare isnt quite what it should be i think. crash is too loud too. overal EQ needs some work too. You should use more bass sounds and use some variation in it.
the basic idea is good but it still needs a lot of work.
its a bit too empty.
keep it up 2/5
cheers
muphasta
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14-09-2004 17:36 |
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hedset
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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hmmmmm. either its me, but it sounds like a early 90's chicago house song, with drum and bass beats put in, never heard anything like it, but i guess the simplicity of the track (no fierce bass or chopped up loops) makes me like it (because till this day, i still dj house music) it sound great, but you should have a diva sing in it, you know, spice it up tons... cool song though
i gives it a 3.50, i really hope youll add more stuff to it, i really like this track
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by hedset: 15-09-2004 09:46.
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