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DigitalF 
Producer
Registration Date: 24-07-2004
Posts: 13
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Please check out my new track 'JuGgLeR' and post your comments here!!!
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24-08-2004 03:48 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
Posts: 643
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hey,,
the overal picture is ok untill the middle.
first i think you should do more with the vocal sample ( delay, pitch, reverse,...)
its a bit boring eventually.
then you put on a major bass sound (verry cool sound) wich is a bit too loud for the beats. or the beats arent powerfull enough for the bassline.
after the bridge you'ld expect hell to explode but it didnt. maybe work from 'down to up' instead of now 'up to down'. you musnt tell the ending before it has even begun. use more different basslines and equalize it to the top. then hear it true several soundsystems so you cann determinate whats too loud and whats to soft.
but anyway who am I
Muphasta
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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25-08-2004 19:41 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Bassline is indeed too loud. It sounds a bit too digital for my taste too, but I guess that's personal.
It misses bass and sub too, you can hear this especially when you use the wasps, after those, the lack of base is very clear. So boost the -80hz part of your bassline or layer a sub under it.
Drums sound a bit too thin from the moment your bassline comes in.
Your kick is too low. Boost the 80hz-90hz part of it, not the lower parts. And make it a bit louder.
Vocal isn't very intresting and it's overused imo.
Track gets a bit boring after a few minutes, probably due to the fact that it's essentially your bassline + the drums and thats it...
Make the track a bit faster too 
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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27-08-2004 14:07 |
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PaperWall
Producer
Registration Date: 15-10-2004
Posts: 54
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hi there
i think its a little to simple there is no momrnt that i want to go dance
but there are nice parts in the track but u need to fill up some parts
and re mix the sound volume of some of them sounds
after a while i get bored ( no offence)
greetz paperwall
There are nice things in ur track also
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12-11-2004 16:17 |
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Dj Kush
Producer
Registration Date: 23-10-2004
Posts: 38
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Techy or what...
Lovin this style m8, Phatter than Pavorotti..
Man i can see you going far..
I am well interested on how you make your work & not the concept of Sample or sequencing etc..
I thought that the beat just needed a beef up not change.. im finding with my own trax that "Getting the Levels & a good Sound outta my Drum Trax still a Ball Aching experience... but im getting there i thihnk..
Apart from the beat issue..... This track should be put forward 2 a Record Label i think..
This gets the HIGHEST RATING on this site....10/10 or 5stars etc.... top Notch m8
Kush
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12-11-2004 22:27 |
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@1$-)
unregistered
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Beats could be stronger, and sample/vocal is in the middle ground between catchy and irritating. I like the kind of popcorn synth and the bass is ok but needs more variation to keep it interesting. Im not sure but it sounds like your using Reason, if so try sampling some drum rolls/build ups from some 60s/70s funk and soul (like Lowell Fulsom and the 24 carat black) put them in recycle and use them to trigger your own sounds, ok its not strictly legal but if you mash them up a bit it will create more tension and your drops will sound a lot heavier, the trick is to not make the pattern your using sound like the original
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12-11-2004 22:42 |
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