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BBear 
Producer
Registration Date: 18-08-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Bear - Nuns ( Wip)' and post your comments here!
Latest thing I'm working on, no structure nor mastering...
Any advice/critique welcome!
I know it's very repetitive but it's in an early stage.
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02-12-2011 16:05 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Drums need more punch/ be louder.
It doesn't have any decent melody or anything.
It's just atmosphere, I would have hoped to hear some variation, other elements, ....
Too little for a tune.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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02-12-2011 16:51 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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05-12-2011 18:04 |
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AuroraFlux
AuroraFlux
Registration Date: 13-09-2011
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wow the sub bass is amazing!!! howd you get it so massive yet not drowning?
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05-12-2011 20:37 |
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Slipstep666
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Registration Date: 09-12-2011
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like da intro on dis here one, if ah had ta change somethin` ah would prob'ly go wif Shir-Pans advice an' lose some o' da highs an' bring out da congas uh little mo'. Bass be uh bit heavy but its fitting fo' da track, ah would prob'ly leave it but maybe give it some lfo action here an' dere fo' some variation. Different style on dis here one but ah like, sounds pimp-tight nigga. Bass going on an' also da basses at 'bout1:04 an' 1:18. Not really into jump up but Ill admit it do gots some creative sheeit ta offer. ah like da drum pattern you used- not da usual smoke snare, kicksnare. don' really lack low end ta me but it wouldn't overpower da track if you upped it otay buh-weet - peace! in the hood!
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14-12-2011 01:10 |
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