Good choice of sounds, nice and deep, the mid of the bass could be little more clear, some addin at the higher frequencies, dope track, takes you someplace, thats what music is all about.
Cool panning work on the intro. Turn up the attack on the envelope of that subbass sounds so you cant hear the click of the sound starting. Kick pattern kinda takes me out of the vibe of what is about to occur. Drop structure isnt really present and lacks tension and suspense. Keep working on this one.
Also it has a kinda irritating hi end element somewhere maybe around 4k but its painful on the ears and grating.